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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From on January 27, 2004
    You do know what they say about idol hands, don't you?"

    The correct word is 'idle', not idol.

    Otherwise, a smokin' chapter!
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  • From ANON - L. L. on January 27, 2004
    I love the story. I like how you write Severus, your Sev seems very well adjusted and wickedly fun! Your Hermione is also written well. I love the upcoming plot development, a week, alot of pot, alot of Severus. You can skip the Ron and Harry sub-plot, unless they get on the wrong side of Snape and he gets to curse them properly. It would be fun to "hear" Sev and Herm gossip about the naughty secrets of the other staff members and have Sev tell her one of Lucius nty ety escapades (to tie back to "she was a light-weight.") I'll leave how Sev uses it to his advantage, up to you!
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  • From ANON - Your Fan on January 25, 2004
    I must say that is one of the most incredable stories i have ever read....I cannot wait till the next chapter is up somtimes i forgot that this was only a fanfiction i would but it if it ever was a book
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  • From ANON - calicat on January 25, 2004
    very well written, although the general story line really doesn't appeal to me, you have definatly drawn me into the story with your well written characters. i really enjoyed it, which came as a suprise to me. but there you have it. Great job and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - dryade on January 25, 2004
    love the story! you made me re-schedule my holiday plans! *grin*
    what i'd really love to see is severus' dark side. always loved that one. just borderline dangerous and all that. i'd love that! really would!
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  • From ANON - Serenityblack2000 on January 24, 2004
    mmmmm...something special. Maybe .... Well mmmvvvvmmmm..... I'll just leave that to your imagination.

    Wonderful Chapter. Ignore those arseholes who flame!

    FLAMERS SUCK! iF YOU DO NOT HAVE ANYTHING NICE TO SAY.T OUT OUT!

    Keep up the good work. "I" enjoy your fic.

    LOL

    SB
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  • From ANON - Redone on January 24, 2004
    This is super, especially the beginning is very good. We never see Severus so relaxed in canon, and I doubt he would be, but your Severus definitely has his charm and I like him a lot =P You have some misspellings now and then that are a bit jarring, but those can be corrected.
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  • From ANON - Spearsister on January 24, 2004
    I know I already reviewed this chapter but I would like to leave a few words of support, people like peggy bundy are intimadated by people with the guts to put their work out there so they resort to childish behav I' I'm so sorry sombody on this site would behave like that. All the writers here are very clear with the don't like don't read rule and people should do just that. Most of us love your work and can't wait for you to update so don't let the smallminded get to you.
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  • From ANON - Spearsister on January 24, 2004
    I'm so glad you've updated I've been looking forward to it. I really love this story and i can't believe people are giving you a hard time. sometimes people suck. I have to say I love your writing style everything I write is to serious so I really enjoy this type of story so go write more hee hee
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  • From ANON - Excel on January 23, 2004
    This is bloody hilarious and attention capturing. I was weary when I read the summary, but the first chapter was amazing. Who knew? And I love this pairing, of course. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - sinj on January 23, 2004
    Hey, first things first: really like this story, have to admit wasn't exactly enthused with the hash bar scenario but what can I say? you've won me over. Can't wait until the next chappie! Update soon.

    now I don't normally read other people's reviews of stories but your comments at the top of your last chapter made me go and take a look and now I have a bee in my bonnet which I need to lay to rest.

    I'd like to take issue with the comments left by PeggyBundy about this story and about the HG/SS ship in general. First let me say that I believe in constructive criticism and the right of individuals to comments on elements of a story that they find unacceptable, for example racism etc. If Peggy was merely trying to convey that she would be within her rights. However she chose to resort to childish namecalling and incoherent offensive remarks.

    If she is appalled with a student / teacher relationship she is perfectly entitled to that opinion. I hn ton to find the idea a bit squicky too - but I recognise that this is only my opinion and am perfectly happy with other people writing and reading stories in that scenario - I choose not to but I don't seek to impose that choice on other people and as can be seen here would fight against anyone who tried to impose it on others.

    The legal age of consent in the UK is 16 but obviously teacher-student relationships are forbidden and in real-life I would frown and report one if I knew about it and this is the crucial distinction in REAL LIFE. The works here are all fiction, based on fictional characters and thus can be used to explore territory that is forbidden in reality. In fact, this story 't e't even about that which makes her review even more irrelevent. Clearly Peggy has not bothered to read past the summary to find out that Hermione is out of school, of legal age and that Snape is no longer her teacher. So if these are her issues she's picked the wrong story to target.

    Finally,
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  • From ANON - T on January 23, 2004
    I like your story! I think it's funny, I wondered if drugs would ever come to the world of hogwarts. I hope you will continue this for a w!!!!!!!! I really am enjoying it, just one question, what about introducing a bong. j/k I really do like your story and you can tell the others, who send flames, it's their choice to read it or not if they don't like it, don't read anymore! There is NO need to be an asshole. PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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  • From ANON - morgana on January 23, 2004
    very very nice. i really like how you portray severus. he's still snarky and very wicked but he's likable in that sexy slytherin way of his. what about silk scarves? how you use them is up to well him i suppose lol
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  • From ANON - Laurie on January 23, 2004
    Your story is great keep the chapters coming.
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  • From ANON - Sherrafina on January 23, 2004
    I LOVE this story!! PLEASE keep it coming:)
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