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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - chocobo pirate on January 22, 2004
    wheee!!! i love your story! it's totally awesome. love how you added are you being served in the. ma. makes me smile. keep up the good work! (damn, I sound like a teacher.... bleh... -__-'
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  • From ANON - Rilla on January 22, 2004
    This story is so much fun. (Of course, I suppose you can't really take my word on it, since I was first on Peggy's list of horribly depraved, disgusting authors and all. hehe) Looking forward to that smut you write so well!
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on January 22, 2004
    YOU are pure wicked, leaving us hanging like that. Bad Shaolin, bad, bad, bad.

    And BTW, I loved this chapter. Specifically, I loved this:

    **The side of his mouth twitched in spite of his actions to not smile. He leaned
    in to be closer to her. "Oh, I'd say dinner, dancing, maybe some high class
    shagging."**

    At least he recognizes that she is high class!!! Keep it coming!!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 21, 2004
    I really love this story, but the last 3 times I've seen it posted its been the same ending chapter. I don't think its right to do that. I'm going to read the story and I know the title and believe me when I see you've updated it I'll read it, but I think if you keep reposting with no chapters you'll jusss pss people off because then you get their hopes up and when they see you have no new chapter its dissapointing.
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  • From ANON - cofaym on January 21, 2004
    I agree, I love this story, but I also agree about reposting it. I see the title and get all excited but then I see the "last updated"e ane and start pouting. If you want your story back on the front page, write us a new chapter to d ove over!
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  • From ANON - Nic on January 21, 2004
    Hi, I really like your story, but I don't think it is good to repost the same chapter to get back on the first site of this list. Otherwise, as I said your story is well written and interesting. The good no the best thing about FanFiction is that you can write what never would happen in the books. And to Peggy, read the summary and if you don't like what you read there, don't read the story, this is how I do this, so I do not need to judge a story badly just because I don't like the subject.





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  • From ANON - jkrazed on January 20, 2004
    Balance and Counter-balance



    I like Switzerland. I like the idea of neutrality. So when Shaolin first e-mailed me because she and I were listed among a group of authors to be classified as sick and twisted because we have written HG/SS, my response was, in so many words, I
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  • From ANON - wiccanwillow on January 16, 2004
    This is a great story. Loved how Hermione has dumped the boys to be with a real man. Can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - PeggyBundy on January 16, 2004
    A hash bar?! What a load of steaming shit! And you have the nerve to criticize others works. This is the crappiest load of dung I've read. You think to highly of yourself and your writing. And youviewviewers must be on crack. Hermione/Snape...WRONG AND SICK! The only man fit for her is Ron and not some old, twisted pedophile. Hang with Michael Jackson much. ^_^

    And I know you'll probably delete this but I don't care! Every story you write, I'll give you my honest opinion. You suck.
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  • From ANON - Serenityblack2000 on January 15, 2004
    This fic is so totally awsome!!! I think it good to teach those two gits a lesson. And as for being OOC who gives a rats ass!! They are Stoned!

    Plepostpost more.....Pretty Pretty Please. I gotta see how this end!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hurry Hurry!!!

    SB
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  • From ANON - Titania on January 14, 2004
    On My God! I need more! Please! Now, while you are busy writing, I am going to light up and call my boyfriend.

    Titania
    Author of Fucking with Snape and Walls
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  • From ANON - ehu on January 13, 2004
    yummy smut and tastefully done too! all the descriptions made even ME pant, and thats hard to do.
    i hope that you continue to update, now that i'm going to be reading your story until its done! so far
    i haven't seen anything really grammatically incorrect (i wasn't looking for it anyways, to absorbed in...
    other fanciful meanderings). great story! happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 13, 2004
    lolol , oh I'm definitely still enjoying this one. Lololol

    loved the Ron comment. The situation was just bad enough to 'suck dick' it sucked malfoy dick. LOLOLOLOL I have *so* got to remember that line. : )~


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - casi on January 12, 2004
    I just love this story. It's really just hot. I would love to see more interaction between hermione and harry and ron.. nothing sexual but when they are together and fighting its wonderful.
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  • From Deblovesdragon on January 12, 2004
    I LOVE this story!
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