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Reviews for E Pluribus Unum

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - ionopsis on January 12, 2004
    hello,

    love ur works. lol no other way to put it. love the character u created, as well as the character development throughout the story. one of the stories i coo geo get updates for. lol don't know what else to say keep up the good work? lol hehehe i hope someone responds to ur challenge should be interesting to read. all right then, i'll let u go back to writing and updating. can't wait to read more. lol (yes i know, i laugh a lot) bye bye
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  • From ANON - RaquelGrenleaf on January 12, 2004
    Sorry, about the two posts. my comp is going all wacky. I sent the second one in, not knowing that the first one actually DID go though. I hate it when that happens. OH, and forget the kissing up part, but not unless it actually gets me somewere. jk. I also was reading some of the other replies (hope you don't ) an) and when I was reading one of the others, it reminded me of something, WHEN ARE YOU GOING THE WRITE SOME MORE LEMONS FOR US? You've only writen one lemon for EPU and you wrote four of them for Sub Rosa. I mean come on, you've got to write more lemons then that for us. Sorry, going a little over board there. But anyway, you do what you think is for the story, it is your after all.

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  • From ANON - RaquelGreenleaf on January 12, 2004
    O.K. First thing, I didn't get a chance to read your story yesterday, so I read both chapters today, so I've got thing to say and ask about both chapters. Number one is, I know you don't get payed for writing these, but wouldn't it be cool if you did? (Me) I would think so. Number two, I noticed you put a bit of an arguement in there. (Thank you.) Number three, you totally got Heriome's attitude perfectly, when Draco makes one of his little comments about her. On the dot. Number four, (your latest one) I thought I saw one with the name Moaning Myrtle on it, but I wasn't sure. Number five, (am I on five now, wow) you are doing a great job as always. And you DO deserve to get payed. Your great at what you do, if anyone deserves it, you do. (A little kissing up, does it get me anywhere. But I'm being honest as well.) O.K. now that I'm past the numbers, I know you like to foces on Kate and Severus but what do Harry and the rest of them do when your writing about Kate and Severus. We have nothing to go on about them. I'm not trying to insult the way you write, I would just like to know what your ap top to, that'l. Al. And when are you going to get back to Harry's and Minuet's relationship, Huh?

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  • From Deblovesdragon on January 12, 2004
    Oh my, this is awesome! Miss Mangle came to Kathryn in a dream? They have some sort of understanding now?? Is Miss Mangle going to protect Severus?? Wow, this is so cool.

    I have one request Barrie. Some adolescent citrus. Not a whole lemon, just highly diluded (sp) lemon juice. Lemon peel? Maybe a little rind. Up to you.

    Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 12, 2004
    Brr.
    We had a heating problem and it's being fixed, only I have to wait until next morning...
    So here I am reading again with a heater as close as possible and dressed in a fur coat and very warm pants, still freezing. I hope I survive the night.
    *grin*
    This chapter was very informative, I was left wondering about Ms. Mangle before, but then I just started the next chapters and started to wonder about other things.
    I'm really looking forward to more about her.
    One question, how many chapters are you planning for this story? Something like SR was? More? Less?


    Helen
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 12, 2004
    Grr!
    I'm so angry at something, no idea what, but I'm seeing red.
    I've been waiting for an update for hours... Last night went to sleep because it looked like it wasn't coming. Even worse NO stories upd updated on any site. I was already worried that there was some worldwide powercut that I seemed to have been left out of. GRRR!
    And then this morning I see all the updates at once everywhere, I had to go back pages to find this!
    Sorry to rant but I'm really frustrated and only half of my caffeine supply has been ingested so far...

    I loved the chapter as always. Draco's comments are a lot of fun to read. But I'm worried about Ron... And wondering when the HP/MR relationship is going to get more spotlight...(hint!hint!)


    Helen
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  • From ANON - Kateri on January 11, 2004
    Wonderful update. The whole story is coming along nicely. I'm very eager for the next update
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  • From Deblovesdragon on January 11, 2004
    Awesome! Leave it to Hermione to come up with a plan. And I am so glad that you made all of the other kids catch on so quickly. Ah, a sunny beam of hope in this dark world.
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 11, 2004
    Awesome Chapter....! A shot of light In the Darkness of all the angst!!!! Did i just say that..? Well I loved it.. Hmmm are we going to see something blossoming between Draco and Hermione or is it just that he is finally dropping his stupid predudices to see the value of a good friend?

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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on January 11, 2004
    Delicious, as usual. I'm curious, are you going to have a moment of epiphany for poor Fauna so she can get on with her life? We know that Severus and Kathryn can ride any storm but I do feel badly for the students sucked into the whirlwind that don't have the fortitude of Harry and Minuet.... Just a thought. I'm a softie.
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  • From ANON - RaquelGreenleaf on January 11, 2004
    Great as always!!! But I don't think you need to hear that again. Or maybe you do. I would, if I was writing a story. (O I w I would continue to write my story.)It always made me feel better, knowing that people liked it. So there you go. The chapter was great, the way you wrote it was great, and Kate did a great job of beta-ing it. (So she wouldn't feel left out. Gotta give her a bit of credit too you know.) Oh, and when you E-mail the pics, PLEASE do it diring the day (if you can) I'm using my dad's sn and he deleted it, (don't weiry I did get to read it. He never permanently deletes anything, so I got to read it.) And thankx for E-mailing me back. I always feel like I'm important when that happens.

    P.S. Thankx for welcoming me in to the strange but fun world that is Sub Rosa. (got that from Pirates of the Carribean. You know the one part when they first get to Tortuga.ywayyway thankx for everything, and anything later on.

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  • From ANON - Helen on January 10, 2004
    I was a bit confused at first as to what is going on but then it all made sense.
    I had a very awful evening tonight but the ending of this chapter made me smile.
    You write very well, don't stop and keep making people smile!


    Helen
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  • From ANON - JC on January 10, 2004
    Thanks for a most enjoyable story. And, thanks to Kate for facilitating.
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  • From ANON - (He)len on January 09, 2004
    This chapter was different...
    It's good to read when the writing changes and isn't always the same.
    Although it's really sad how things are getting darker.
    *sigh*


    Helen(I read from somewhere that shortening your name takes power over yourself away from you... I read too much)
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  • From ANON - RaquelGreenleaf on January 09, 2004
    I know my comment might be a bit late (seeing as you've already are on a second part to your story) but,ead ead your first part, ficlettes and second part (the part your on now) all in three days. (well more or less.) I started reading it once, but had to stop to go some were, and couldn't find it for about two to three weeks . And then I found it about thrays ays ago (odviouslly) and could not stop reading it. (stayed up till 6:15 in the morning reading it once. my normal time is 3:30, not past 6. But it's o.k.) There were a few things I wanted to ask you, but I can't remember them right now. (I ask when i CAN remember. Kay?) But for now I'll say this at less. I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Here's one thing I wanted to ask, about Harry and Minuet, is it a serious or is it just a small fling? Because I would HATE IT if Harry got his hope up, and then, find out that she doesn't really care about him, the way he cares about her.

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