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Reviews for E Pluribus Unum

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Len on December 28, 2003
    Here I am again. 3am this time. Thank some deity for vacations and the fact that the eraliest I have to be today is 11.30 to have my eyes checked. I'm not sure that sitting behind a computer reading will help with the results.
    But addictions are just that and this story is one of the biggest addictions I have, which I can luckily have my fill on each night or in the case that there is no vacation in the morning before running out so I won't be late.
    You know you should change the title of the first chapter too... Althou mus must say that Unim sounded better in my mind than Unum does. Well latin latin is better than not quite latin.

    Running commentary shall follow.

    I'm not qute sure why, but each time I read the name Minuet I get a mental image of warm chocolate covered muffins. There's just no explenation for it as she certainly doesn't look or sound like that...
    Slytherins don't giggle.. Hmm. That's good as the picture in my mind of Snape giggling is just too much.
    I alost jumped out of my chair too when Kathryn said her line(THE line, as she's rather quiet in this chapter..)

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  • From ANON - jeannette on December 28, 2003
    you are so good.are you going to work on a relationship for hermione next?i really don't think ron would be a good person for her.maybe kathryns brother.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 28, 2003
    Awww that was so cute!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 28, 2003
    You can't hear it, but I am clapping right now and shouting "Yeah!!!". (okay,ealiealize that it is hard to type and clap at the same time, but somehow I am managing.) Harry kissed Minuet. I couldn't be happier!!!!
    Keep writing.
    Cheers!!
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  • From ANON - Brian on December 28, 2003
    IT'S ABOUT DAMNED TIME BARRIE!!!!!! finally Min is getting her wish, and Harry has someone too. Now all you need to do is hurry up with the lemons.
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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on December 28, 2003
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Fluff accepted. Nicely written. Wonderful threatening Slytherins to keep us on track....
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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on December 28, 2003
    I just love it when "Saint Potter" acts like a jerk. Once again, thanks for the update (and so frequently too - much appreciated). You write angst so well, although I think I'm missing the scent of lemons these days.... I trust they'll come eventually!
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  • From ANON - Len on December 27, 2003
    Oh I had the bestest mental image of Harry's antics ecpecially with that hair.

    I didn't squeal as much as I feared, but the laughter proved fatal to preseving other people's sleep.

    Well there are better things than sleep though... *grin*


    Len
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  • From ANON - Len on December 27, 2003
    Why is it suddenly UnUm not UnIm anymore...
    Maybe I'm seing things considering that it is 3am.
    Need to reread it in the morning anyway to have memomemory...

    *yawn*

    I'm not sure what I'm doing.

    Love the story, am going to read the latest chapter now and try not to squeal as much as I am doing now out of joy of a new chapter and wake the man in the next room up...

    I need sleep, but have to read first.


    Len
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 26, 2003
    I hope you answer some questions in the next chapter... like what was controlling Draco? Was it David? I hope Fauna is over her crush now. I sure would be. :-)
    Write more soon Friendlyquark.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on December 26, 2003
    Three chapters in one evening,I`m almost exhausted yet happy and excited as well-lovely angst,the sort of writing I appreciate so much,it was splendid-all these new characters of your own.I didn`t want to experience such a horrific thing that Draco had-very tramatic for him,I think.He`ll need Severus` support,I think this is the sort of things they are very familira for DE-the pure violation against someone`s will,including the violator`s one as well and Severus had many such experiences,so,I hope,knows the ways to deal with aftermath.It was wonderfully good-Severus as Kate`s savior.The most interesting problems for me,just minutes after reading-first-Minuet and Harry-have they any chance for the happy recognition and life or the darkness would eat both of them,another one,I think,more important question-Kate`s bounds made by Dumbledore,taming her killer`s instincts-is it really good for her and Order or rather too far coming disturbance that could cost her life in the future?I don`t think she`s unable to keep control herself in these cases,this is very interesting plot,the one that has moved me now.Sorry for my chaotic mail,maybe more uneven than usual,but I was 24 hours in job during Christmas and,of course have my family,anger and anxious because of my absence,so my mind is spinning in head,"jingling bells" are everywhere,but it didn`t stop me from the main pleasure of the evening-the reading of the favourite fics-with the one of you on the top.I`m curious if David(very nasty personBTW)would make any more appearances and what role would play,I want to see the confrontation between Kate and him once more with his very unpleasant end,I don`t really like the kind of traitor he`s been.
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  • From ANON - jeannette on December 26, 2003
    i almost thought that draco was doing that to fauna on his own,instead of being under a spell.that was great,can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - jeannette on December 26, 2003
    oooohh, i can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 26, 2003
    OOOOHHHHH this is SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER.

    Your first 10 paragraphs or so are such damn good imagery.


    I've been ina serious mood for angsty and dark and Iam so happy withthis chapter.

    See a Disney movie- BAH. I want more angst and dark.

    I knew somethign wasn't good with Fauna, poor girl. My goodness, poor Severus, the poor man is tortured enough, but this is the stuff of angst and makes the sweet so much sweeter.

    Somehow I see teh killer that is K is going to come out, yet only Severus will be able to understand.

    Still maintaining that adult persective between Sev and K. Harry is getting more into aspects beyond his years. Very vweery angsty and verry gry good.

    By minimizing the comfort you do up the angst.






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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 24, 2003
    Oh, that was a very cure chapter with Harry and Min.

    So Fauna might also be something else. Interesting.

    Thanks for posting so soon and Happlidalidays
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