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Reviews for E Pluribus Unum

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - dave gerecke on December 22, 2003
    Great - I like it
    Keep going
    dave
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 21, 2003
    I just love it. Waiting for the next chapter.

    Poor Sev, whether heknows it or not, the baby is going to ruin his reputation.


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  • From ANON - Lores on December 20, 2003
    Excellent story! I love the baby so much! Glad to see Ron get put in his place also, I always did think he was a narrow minded prat!
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  • From ANON - kate on December 20, 2003
    There are several points where your stories make me cry. The exchange between Harry and Severus -- where Harry says he's sorry for whatever Severus had to go through to get Ryan not to mentino the "he's himself" parry -- makes me well up each and every time I read it (and that's saying something, you know).
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 20, 2003
    Another g cha chapter, the imagery of the growth in Potter and Granger and the comparison is very well done. The working in of "Potter is not his parents" is seamless.

    Severus doesn't seem happy about the bindings. Interesting.


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  • From zephyrs1desire on December 20, 2003
    Great Chapter!!! Finally some accord between Snape and Harry! i hope Harry is alright. You are a great writer. I am really enjoying this story!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on December 19, 2003
    I love Kate`s attitude as the Ryan`s baby-sitter,I see the Severus`both tension and relief when he realized she`s been able to handle his baby appearence so well,however for the reader (me,of course!) it was obvious she would manage because of her love to him,the nobility of soul and character and the kind of family she was brought up,but he had feared so much,I suppose,that the baby`s origin could be the obst bet between them.I enjoy the Arthur`s role as the adviser in very new subject of Severus` life-the fatherhood.I think that the Severus` will to make Weasleys the foster parents for Ryan is equisite as well.The scene with Ron is priceless!You have real sense of drama,the ability to write so interesting and your style!Simply delightful!I`m still issedssed that here,on the amateurs` site,for non-sale writers-I have the highest pleasure to meet such an astonishingly talented author with great sense of well-done work,rich vocabulary,amazing imagination and expressive style-I suck in every chapter like only the hungry vampire could do;)The entire world around me is vanishing,because my mind is engrossed in fantastic reality of your story.I`ve so loved it,since both fics of you ease the hard hours of my duties,the reading is my painkiller and hobby,thank you for all!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 19, 2003
    Great chapter, humor " looked like he'd eat the baby" and angst.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 19, 2003
    She sure told Ron off, didn't she. Well that will show him. I love it when Kathryn is fiercely (sp) protective of Severus. Ryan will be alright though. And Ron will get over it too, right?

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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on December 19, 2003
    I was delighted to find Kathryn back in action with our beloved Severus. Your writing is wonderful and yuor imagery is priceless - I laughed so hard the the "pastel fairy" picture because I think you've met my mother! Keep it up and thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 18, 2003
    Lupin as a friend, but still very dark feelings about Sirus Black. So our PM is still very dark. Are you going to take this story darker?

    The baby store scene is in complete agreement with my perceptions of these places. Running into an old student with a baby, that must have shocked her!

    Great writing as usual.

    Thanks for the update.


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  • From ANON - kate on December 18, 2003
    I love the mental image of Snape galumphing through nauseatingly cute shops and wearing a baby sling ~ and my collection of favorite lines (mostly yours, thank you very much) now includes "the pastel fairy had exploded all over it."

    Can't wait to see how the rest of the students respond to Ryan.....

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  • From ANON - Len on December 17, 2003
    *grins*
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on December 17, 2003
    re: husband being confused by antics- I think you've got the wrong girl with husband. Mine is just highly amused that I read "that Harry Pootter Porn." I tried explaining the source of my giggles once, but it didn't really translate. I'd make him read Sub Rosa, butm afm afraid he'd get annoyed with the Elves (who he thinks are a bunch of fairies, in the un-PC sort of way) and hasn't even gotten around to book 5.
    Still, I'm highly enjoying the story. It makes it somwhat hard to put up with the drivel that other people try to pass off as fanfic, but that's my problem, not yours. :)
    E Pluribus has been fun so far, but I'm still waiting for the real plot to begin, hint, hint. (that means you should post lots and lots!)

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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on December 17, 2003
    The awakening of ntalntal feelings-regarding all Severus`attitude-appears very strange yet noite ite impossible opportunity.This is one of my oldest problems connected with Snape character-were he able to be a decent father despite his own probably horrible experince from the childhood?I think his bitterness and cruelty is veryp-rop-rooted in his soul and character but,according with Minerva`s words-it`s utterly new and different situation having the child for one`s own,maybe the kind of redemption,I suppose.Love for woman and own child-the light in the long,dark tunnel-very romantic option,however the so-called Cannon Snape fits rather hardly,but I can`t help believing in the better side of him-it`s obvious,I know-the fact I have read all these fics,including your story-is the real proof of my opinion.The time before christmas is full of madness-my work,preparations and,above all,insanity ofppinpping-make me exhausted.I hope you`re able to find time for writing as well as me,trying to check the updates every day.
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