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Reviews for E Pluribus Unum

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 26, 2004
    Oh FQ, I LOVED it when Severus flicked his wrist and the knife appeared in his hand. It brought back memories of a adolescent crush on a boy who could flip his butterfly knife open and closed. It was the combination of grace and danger that got to me. Severus in this chapter just reminded me of that. (hubba, hubba)
    Really worried about Severus in the next chapter. Miss Mangle knows and I am afraid of what she will do with that information.
    Keep writing dear. We all appreciate it.

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  • From ANON - Brian on January 26, 2004
    for hitting a wall you sure seem to have outdone yourself on this chapter. We definitely need to see this side of all the characters more often, especially neville and Draco. ::drool:: Draco....
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  • From ANON - Kateri E on January 25, 2004
    Oh this chapter was great, snape was wonderful
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 25, 2004
    I love your sense of humor ... and the fact that you manage to put funny words into every character's mouth at some point and make them sound -- well -- IN character. (
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 25, 2004
    *laughs uncontrollably*
    Even characters laughing in a computer screen in writing can have contageous laughter.
    I think this light moment was needed with all the foreboding darkness looming ahead.
    And I liked Minuet's POV.
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  • From ANON - JCC on January 25, 2004
    Every day the quest for the next chapter; and as always, it is soooo good! Thanks so much for a great adventure!

    Kudos to you! I look forward to the day when your original bound material makes the "New York Times Best Sellers" list.

    Patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 25, 2004
    That chapter was so cool. Neville going comatose as he realizes that Snape is human .. Loved it!!!

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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 24, 2004
    Very glad that Kat and Sev managed to get out of that battle without blowing their covers or leaving the kids unprotected. Getting one of the Evil Ones out of the way doesn't hurt, either. I like the continuing character information on Miss Mangle, from the knife's disinterest in her to Snape's ability to feel the bond there, though I have to wonder what will happen to her in the end. I doubt she could simply turn into a real girl, Pinocchio-like.

    Hooray for frequent updates!
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 24, 2004
    "Of course, a near death outing and danger would get his homicidal lover in the mood."

    I'm still laughing. :)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 24, 2004
    Good chapter with a bit of action. Hmm so what is Ms. Mangle? A demon looking for redemtion?


    I like your Malfoy description. I like my Malfoys evil and hot and I think you got both.

    You can tel Sev likes his job in the chapter, and he's even copped a bit 'tude.



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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 24, 2004
    Way to go Neville!!!
    I mean, I expected great things from Severus, but Neville? (Severus dispatching Madam Gideon was well done too.)
    Now Ryan is a little more safe than he was before.
    Great!!
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on January 24, 2004
    Very nice fight scene, you do write them so well. Kudos on tying up both Neville's and Orion/Severus's problems and getting Neville to do it. Lovely, simply lovely. I do hope you'll find it in your heart to actually write the next scene instead of alluding to it. Come on, throw us a lemon, puhleeze! You do it oh, so well.
    *flutters eyelashes furiously*
    :)
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 24, 2004
    Argh! It's a lucky thing you DO write fast, because that's a horrible, horrible cliffhanger. I mean, it's GOOD, but the fact that it ends there is bad. Oh, you know what I mean. Anyway, the idea of Snape with knives up his sleeves is very cool.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 24, 2004
    I thought I reviewed earlier, but the review isn't there...hmmm....

    I'm hoping that the 'who will die' question is easily resolved...all the Death Eaters just explode, leaving tiny pieces of Death Eater all over the street. But things rarely work out like that. Severus and Kathryn on their first op together. :) That is kinda sweet, in the 'one-of-them-may-very-well-die' sort of way. More story please? :)
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 23, 2004
    This just seems like a very er.. unique form of foreplay...
    >.
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