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Reviews for E Pluribus Unum

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Droxy on January 23, 2004
    OOOh an evil cliff hanger.

    Loved teh dialog between Sev and K here.

    Yes, Kate teh beta is a Slytherin, but possibly more Ravenclaw. If she was Slytherin, she'd be trying to get money for this LOL. Cheerleaders are Hufflepuffs.

    I am going to India again- leavingday.day.


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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 23, 2004
    No THAT is how cliffhangers should be done. BAM!
    I know that you will write more tomorrow, so I will refrain from begging. Okay, just a little... Please write more tomorrow. You can't leave us hanging like this!!!!!
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Deeble on January 22, 2004
    I was trying to savor this and read slowly enough that you'd always be ahead of me, but alas! I couldn't help myself. It's just too good, dammit. At least I know you won't leave us hanging. I'm thankful (and awed) that you can write so fast AND so well, since the two are generally mutually exclusive in fanfic land.

    Now that I'm caught up: This is a great tale. You're carefully avoiding the sequel-for-sequel's sake pitfall -- I'm having a hard time deciding whether I like this or Sub Rosa better. Great continued character development all around (Minuet and Harry are so cute together), with a bunch of "oh wow" plot developments. (Snape has recessive dragon genes -- hmm, maybe that explains the temper?)

    The Dark ones are chilling, scarier even than Voldemort. I'm glad you're holding out the possibility of redemption for Miss Mangle, though, since she was far too young (and scarred) to understand what she was getting into. I suppose she hasethiething in common with the potions master ... guess that explains the connection between them.

    Thanks for sharing your imagination with us all.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 22, 2004
    Finally some sense into Ron. Of course I didn't get any questions answered, just got more of those...
    But at least the matter has been brought to light.
    Just one thing though, didn't Katie Bell graduate already?


    Helen
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 22, 2004
    Looks like Minuet is being the quiet voice of reason. Hopefully Ron is just being a bastard, since the alternative is 'a-bastard-controlled-by-Dark-Ones'. Loverly update!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 22, 2004
    Good to see that the kids are going to do something and most likely get into trouble.
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  • From ANON - kate on January 22, 2004
    Well, damn. Apparently I need a beta for my reviews. Allow me to correct (ahem): "(forgive me FOR this overused word)"


    Perhaps you SHOULD BE offering my job to others.



    Naaaaah! ;*
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  • From ANON - kate on January 22, 2004
    HEY!!! I know I can out-wrestle anyone but are you offering my job to others?? LOL

    We knew Min was smart but good on Neville for being the first to state the brilliant ("We need to get Professor Leblanc"). It's so refreshing to see others (Terry Boot and Neville, for example) being used to flesh out a story. So often an author's focus winds up being so restricted to just a few main characters that they forget there are other characters who can do more than just provide comic relief. I know I've been guilty of that.

    I must say that I like the way you have Slytherin and Gryfindor combining their strengths, leading to a true (forgive me this overused word) synergy. The only downside is that Dumbledore is probably buzzing with self-congratulatory pride, claiming that this is a result of his years of scheduling the two Houses into double potions classes!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 21, 2004
    I am trying to understand the motivations of Miss Mangle. A conflicted demon is something difficult for my little brain to wrap itself around. She is a very facinating character though.
    Thanks for the clarification about Draco. Didn't realize he was that much the smitten kitten. It has been so MANY years since I have seen LadyHawk. Maybe I should rent it again.
    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 21, 2004
    You know I was checking your profile every ten minutes to see if the 37 had turned to a 38.
    Baked a cake and did all sorts of things. Not being ill and having nothing to do islly lly boring...
    Ooo...
    That was very interesting. And we know how Brinna became a demon too, well not exactly, but you've given the clues. So what about him? Was he always a demon or will we get another story...?


    Helen
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on January 20, 2004
    I didn't realize how much of the sequel was already written...wow...
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  • From ANON - droxy on January 20, 2004
    I've never read a lemon scene like that one!
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 20, 2004
    Heh.
    Very very good persuasion methods.
    I'm thinking of joining the movement to get a badge with E Pluribus Unum on it...

    Helen
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 20, 2004
    Another excellent chapter!
    Thanks for the lemons.

    The pureblood dance that you came up with, the Hevaida, was interesting. When I was reading that section, I imagined the dance to be like the Hawaiian hula. All grace and hand movements.

    A few chapters back you had mentioned that Draco "liked" Hermione. I need a little clarification please. As a friend, a girl, girlfriend, human being, what?? I know that he is betrothed to Lilith, but is there something else?

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  • From ANON - Helen on January 19, 2004
    Well I'm freaked out.
    I was halfway through this and went to get some more tea.
    AS I was passing through the other room I glanced at the TV.
    There was a commercial on about joining the animal rights movement here. And it showed a big crest with the three lions it was green, but the freaky part ist abt above the lions there was written E PLURIBUS UNUM. And that was the first time I ever saw that commercial.
    Great chapter as always. And finally some Harry/Min! *grin*

    Helen
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