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Reviews for Secretly Slytherin

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - catpower on April 04, 2005
    Wow - what a fantastic, brilliant story. I really enjoyed reading about Helena, instead of Hermione, with Snape, for a change. I love Hermione, of course, but find I'm beginning to get a bit confused with so many different versions of her and the various different accounts of her de-flowering - the poor girl seems to
    lose her virginity every few nights!

    Helena is almost a female Snape in her ways. And your sex scenes - I think they must be the most steamy and varied I've ever read. You must have had some amazing lovers - that's all I can say! The way you write your sex scenes is very different - lots of surprises, unusual ideas and tasteful use of language (in my opinion). Sometimes I find what you write very erotic and sometimes I just stare at my screen in voyeuristic astonishment: sensitising potion; transfiguring wands into handcuffs; S-shaped pubes (LOL); Avian contraceptive (LMAO); Snape happily admiting he enjoyed receiving anal sex! And that astonishing bit where Snape put his own pre-cum on his tongue and kissed Helena - the fascinating details keep on coming (sic).

    One thing that concerns me is that I seem to remember that you stated that you have written a HG/SS story, although I haven't read it yet. Presumably, for Hermione to end up with Snape later, you will have to do away with Helena - unless the two stories are in no way connected. Helena's death scene could be very poetic and impressive but I'd find it upsetting - she's a great character.

    Another thing I appreciated is that your Voldemort is genuinely horrific, which he needs to be.

    Thank you for providing me with hours of not-so-innocent amusement.
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  • From ANON - Julie on March 30, 2005
    Oh! Please, oh please, oh please! Write a sequel. This was wonderful! You have a gift. Very, very sexy. Excellent writting. I could go on and on...
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  • From on March 23, 2005
    omg, i love your stories. and i'm so glad you didn't make snape onto a prissy lovesick greaseball. and your little parody was so funny i fell out of my chair i was laughing so hard. thank you for writing such a wonderful fanfic. lol.
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  • From ANON - Lady Jade on March 15, 2005
    I must say, you had me woried there for a second. Whew! I thought this was about to turn very dark. I am glad it does not seam to be heading it that direction, yet.
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  • From ANON - C on February 06, 2005
    Oh. Dear. God. That was the funniest chapter ending I've stumbled across, in *any* form of the written word. Thank you! Your snarky sense of humor and brilliant writing are very much appreciated, and the sex scenes make me wish (even more) that I could clamour into Hogwarts for a go with the Potions professor. Though I would definitely tie him up...maybe you will, later in the story? Here's to hoping.
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  • From ANON - Maria on January 31, 2005
    Fantastic!! Couldn't stop reading!! Please please write a sequel!!!!
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  • From ANON - Andrea Baptista on January 28, 2005
    HI.. YOU'RE JUST GREAT!! I'M GLAD YOU MADE A CONTINUATION (OR WHATEVER, MY ENGLISH IS NOT VERY GOOD) OF "DON'T LIE TO ME".. REALLY WHEN I DISCOVERED THIS TALE HEHE.. I'M GLAD ANY WAY.. KEEP ON WRITING..
    HAVE A NICE DAY... ;)
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  • From ANON - Kenzie on December 27, 2004
    Your story rocks! Sorry I haven't reviewed yet... guess I've been a "lurker"... following along faithfully, & loving every line - yet was never considerate enough to take a few minutes to review! Please forgive! Snape is in character TO A "T"!!! I also really enjoy the way that Helena chooses to deal with him! I liked the way it started out really light & kind of carefree... now that they're more involved things are getting a bit... er... sticky. Snape definitely isn't a man who comes with no baggage! LOL! Fantastic story, you're writing style is flawless, it flows together so smoothly & is really easy to read! Congrats on an excellent Snapefic! Thanks for writing it, it's been a great read!!! (Also has inspired me to get to work on my own - which seems to be stuck in the mud at the moment!) - Kenz
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  • From ANON - Ariel on December 03, 2004
    all of your stories rock, but this one is the best! not only great sex but the plot twists and jaw dropping moments make a fantastic story. i was up till 4 reading this. plus, the funny parts kill me, the parody was hilarious! keep writing, you are so excellent.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2004
    hey these stories are great!!! i usually stay up half the night trying to get the next chpt. so what happens now??? there needs to be more and more and more!
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  • From ANON - jes on September 26, 2004
    please pleas eplease please please
    write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    please this is on of the best sotrys ive read on aff
    you are an amzing author
    please write a sequal
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  • From ANON - Laurie on September 23, 2004
    This fic was delish! Cannot wait for the sequel!
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  • From ANON - terrierhead on September 07, 2004
    Delicious, sneaky Slytherin badness. This isn't mere smut (although, it's not like smut's a bad thing) - the plot is worthwhile and our Snape is in character - hot and sexy as hell. I highly recommend this work!
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  • From scwolf10k on September 06, 2004
    Hi again! I've just finished reading the whole story and it's AMAZING! The story is gets more and more interesting by every chapter and I can't seem to be able to keep my eyes away of the monitor!
    I was really surprized to know that Helena was actually Malfoy's daughter! Yikes! Spooky!! and Lewis is just a ........!!!!
    Snape surprised me with the presents! He bought PRESENTS FOR A RAVENCLAW! And taught her to fully transform herself into an owl.
    I am out of words. This was wonderful! Snape really changed by the time he marked Helena. He suddenly became loving and caring, although he didn't show it. I just love that kind of men.
    One thing amazed me though. Helenan't n't seem to care about Snape being tortured by the Crutiatus Curse. I was hoping to see her hug him tightly and say some nice words to him about how she felt, but that didn't happen.
    Anyway, I'm anxiously waiting for the sequel :) I hope that you'll be able to write it soon :)
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  • From scwolf10k on September 01, 2004
    I've just started reading this :) I've read chapters 1-10 and I must say that I really like it! I can't imagine Snape as a swan, though. Too softy! He would've been a good raven or even a crow! Anyway, I liked the bed part. He can't seem to resist himself with her :) and I really-really liked it when he told Helena that he liked her but he doesn't trust her. That was so remarkable of his side. So Snape-ish!
    I'll read as much as I can again tonight! I can't even concentrate on my own stories while I'm reading this...lol!
    Once again, good work!!!
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