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Reviews for Secretly Slytherin

By : Veresna

From ANON - Malinorne on February 18, 2004
What a story! I'm impressed! This story combines excellent writing with delicious smut in a way I find extremly appealing, and the plot is good too. Not that I need a plot... but still, I like it very much. I'm certainly no HP cannon expert, but this ties in very well with what I remember from the books. Your portrayal of Professor Snape is more or less solely responsible for my recent obsession with this character :)
I do hope you write more about Severus and Helena, even if I must say that Voldemort's plan absolutely squicks me and I'm not sure I'll be up to reading it if the story follows that path. Anyway, thanks for writing 'Secretly Slytherin', it was a very enjoyable reading experience.
Hugs,
Mal
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From ANON - eve on February 17, 2004
This is by far the best fanfiction I have read yet. You are an excellent author, and my computer is stupid for questioning the 'bigger' words you used. Please do write sequel, it'd be a shame to let your talent go to waste! If you ever need anything at all, and I mean anything, just e-mail me. Toodles.
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From ANON - Ashley on February 01, 2004
I love this story. Please right a sequel. Please please please.
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From ANON - icewomin on January 31, 2004
My dearest author/goddess:

I had finally given in to my long-standing but heretofore held-at-bay obsession with Severus Snape and was cruising the net specifically looking for Snape-based porn. So much of what I read was mindless drivel, either keeping Snape in character whileing ing him do bizarre things, or completely taming him and turning him into some kind of freaky Back Street Boy/'NSnyc boy type. Then...I hit on Don't Lie to Me on that other site. After a breathless read and a quick smoke, I went looking for the sequel. Much to my chagrin but being completely unable to stop myself, I spent an entire afternoon at work and then the entire evening at home squirming in my seat in front of the computer as I paged through the entire story. Initially the amazing sex scenes and the fact that the character completely fit my image of Snape drew me in. Then I spent a good portion of the night examining the storyline. What began as PWP has turned out to be the most intellectual, exciting, and well-written romance I've ever read, fan fiction or not - and I've read a fair few romance novels. I could easily see this as a published work in the paperback section of my local B&N, if not for those pesky copyright issues. *sigh*

But that's not why I'm writing. I'm writing to demand the sequel be posted immediately. Yes, I can read Don't Lie to Me and Secretly Slytherin over and over, and I'm sure I will, but you've left me feeling most anxious! How will they get out of this one? Do they want to? And what deliciously smutty antics will they get up to in the meantime? Please, I distincly feel the effects of a Reconciliation Potion - and as we know, there's only one fix for that predicament...
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From ANON - kwarner on January 22, 2004
I think this is the best fanfict I have read so far. It takes alot to hold my attention although Anne Rice has so has Marion Zimmerman Bradley. You have as a fan fict writer it was great (and I do hope there is more). This is probrably the closest story to what I could imagine a relationship with Snape could be (and as a character I would like). Maybe not exact but close enough. I love everything about your Snape, Pomphrey and Dumbledore etc. I believe you have alot of talent especially for a story of this length and hope you have the chance to publish our own work eventualy. Please let me know if if you do (Smut or otherwise I'll read it). Thank you for the greaat story and I can't wait for more. l also wish wish the best if you decide to publish on your own. Thanks again, Karen
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From ANON - Serdaigle on January 21, 2004
I haven't finished the story yet, but the parody at the end of chapter 5 had me laughing out loud the entire time!
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From ANON - linthal on January 19, 2004
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From ANON - cherlark on January 08, 2004
I just loved your stories 'Don't Lie to Me' and 'Secretly Slytherin'. I just finished reading them today. I can't wait for the sequal! I just know that Severus and Helena will come up with something to get back at Lucius!
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From ANON - raclswt on January 07, 2004
I really love this series!!! when are you going to start the next story??? could you please email me (raclswt@yhaoo.com) when you do? thanks!!! :)
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From ANON - maranna on January 03, 2004
"Don't Lie to Me" and "Secretly Slytherin" are great! What wonderful concepts. Plus, the sex education....

Too bad we don't have wizarding pictures....
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From ANON - Danielle on December 16, 2003
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I abso-frickin-lutely LOVED the way this ended!!!!!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the sequel....oh my. She's going to have to get pregnant, hopefully while Potter and clan are fighting the evil, and they'll have to find a way to save their baby. Hmmmm, and then there's the wedding itself. Whoo...I can sooooo picture the honeymoon. Ehem, I mean, I'm sure they'll have a honeymoon. And then there's the little matter of Draco finding out about his "sister" and what they're forcing her to do. How is he going to take that I wr? r? Maybe he'll decide to help them seeing as he really looks up to Snape. And Draco always did remind me of Snape....the whole bad boy thing is such a turn on. *cough* Yep, that w be be Draco for ya. *zones out with dirty thoughts* What was I saying....oh yes, GIMME THE SEQUEL SOON PLEASE!?!?!?!?!?!?
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From ANON - bangzoom on December 13, 2003
Anxiously awaiting the sequel!!! I loved your Helena character! The perfect match for Snape. Please don't leas was waiting too long!
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From ANON - bangzoom on December 06, 2003
I just finished reading "Don't Lie to Me" and "Secretly Slytherin". All I can say is WOW!!! I have never been a big fanfiction reader...(so much of it is truly awful) and I have never in my life read any adult fanfiction. I avoided it thinking it would be mostly someone's stupid, slimey fantasy and have no real story to it. These two stories have changed my mind!! First of all, the writer is obviously well versed in her Potter-lore because she is right on with the exact mood and feel of the series. But her characterization of Snape is perfect. She hasn't turned him into a mushy, lovesick characature. He still retains his unpleasant and condescending tone and is perfectly despicable sometimes. Yet his underlying sense of honor is there, just beneath the surfac.whi.which is what I love about his character in the books. The sex scenes are.....well.....all I can say is, WHEW! Good thing I was wearing my asbestos glasses! This story has taken me days to get through. Like some kind of drug, I needed more and more to get my daily "fix". Meanwhile, the laundry piled up and paperwork went unattended. Thanks for the fabulous entertainment for the past few days. I loved it! Now, I think I better go get some work done......Excellent story!!
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From ANON - Sasha on December 03, 2003

Hi Veressna,

When I had just finished the owl-transfiguration chapter, I wrote

"I was moved to write after this chapter because I think you've entered into new and intriguing territory and I'm impressed with how well you've done it. Again, although I'm not (so far?) a personal fan of sexual cruelty and humiliation, it seems in keeping with your Snape and consistent with your Hogwarts universe.

It's not so believable, to me, as a turn-on for Helena. I'm sure there are 18 year olds who would find this stuff hot, but I would expect them to have more baggage and more intimacy issues than Helena. And THAT Helena would definitely not find Lewis attractive, or maintain the kind of girly friendships she has with Ang and the other roommate. People who enjoy deceit, I think, enjoy and practice it with everyone, and her friendships jus just too wholesome and straightforward. I don't find the girl who enjoys these power games with Snape -- the more interesting girl -- to be the same one who can't bring herself to push her potions partner off. I'd love for you to develop her into a more complex person who has more hidden at all times, not just with her new lover."

Now that I've finished SS, I think you did develop her as I'd hoped. It became clearer to me that the deceitful part of her was relatively small -- more of a talent than a personality style -- and I understood where it came from (not fitting in to your family, needing to please a depressed mom). She is, in fact, a "people pleaser," and so her fondness for her roommates is more congruent than I thought at first.

And Veresssss-na...you did soften him up, didn't you? He seems awfully lovey dovey at the end there. Does everyone come around to that at last?

Sasha

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From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2003
great!!!
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