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Reviews for On Marriage

By : snailexpress
  • From ANON - Moi on January 16, 2005
    I don't suppose I expected them to jump each other's bones, but they will eventually, won't they?

    I must agree, the wedding ceremony was quite touching, no pun intended. Really lovely. Was Dumbledore responsible for the arrangement of the Room of Requirement for the Granger/Snape wedding, or would that have been Severus' latent romance under the influence of wedding magazines? (I can always hope.)

    Hermione/Severus is fast becoming my favorite pairing. You are handling it quite nicely, and doing so with good technical mechanics, style, and pace. I like this Marriage Law story better than any other I've read. Congratulations and best wishes! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2005
    this really is well thought out and written1 I look forward to reading more!
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  • From laceyweasley on January 15, 2005
    Unexpected but sweet. Actually if they are in it for the long haul I can see taking your time so as not to startle someone young, unexperienced, and afraid.

    Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Monkmess on January 14, 2005
    Great story. I've read a lot of the stories on the Marriage law, and am relly enjoying yours. You write well and seem to follow the feeling behind the books. Please keep updating, as I'm excited to finish reading this story.
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  • From ANON - gizmama on January 14, 2005
    This is a wonderful story! I am really enjoying it. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - June W on January 14, 2005
    Ch 15 - YAY, you updated!!!!! Lovely chapter, and I'd still like to know what Severus told Daphne; perhaps Hermione should tell him that she observed his dance with Daphne was the first time Daphne had smiled all day. And - ahem - the wedding night isn't over, is it? There's more coming? Thanks for the update, and I'll be waiting for Chapter 16!
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  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 09, 2004
    Great story...waiting patiently for more!!!
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  • From ANON - MissTrish on November 02, 2004
    One of the best SS/HG 'ships on the net - congratulations! A ripping-good read! :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2004
    I have a silly question. What is WIKTT?
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  • From ANON - Talia on September 11, 2004
    Oh yeah, I LOVED the ceremony, it almost made me cry!!
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  • From ANON - Talia on September 11, 2004
    OOOHH Not fair!! Major Cliffie!! Please update ASAP!! I am going nuts!!
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  • From ANON - m.brigid on September 04, 2004
    Oh, thank you so much! This is good. I am enjoying your incredibly taciturn Snape very much. Hermione ell-ell-done, also, although I suspect I'd have been far, far more nervous if I'd been subject to an arranged marriage at her age. At my current age, I often suspect an outside arrangement is as good a beginning as any other. Ah, well. At any rate, thank you very much for the good read.
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  • From ANON - Arestoktra on September 01, 2004
    OMG! what's coming next? hmm? hehe i don't think Severus will sleep with Hermione "that" quickly although they're married now but hmm maybe they'll start to care for each other or maybe Severus the God of nessness will resque her or something like that which will lead them to a "bed"... lots of opportunities about getting Hermione laid comes to my mind so i stop now:P good work. i like the plot also nd i like it comes longer in each more chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Keebi on August 31, 2004
    So far this is my favorite Marriage Law Challenge fic! The characters all seem incredibly accurate (well, by my view of them, anyway ;-)) and I'm loving the plotline. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Mystedmoon on August 29, 2004
    Write more please! This is sooo good! I love it.
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