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Reviews for On Marriage

By : snailexpress
  • From ANON - Jayle on February 15, 2004
    Pleaz Pleaz Pleaz, I have waited sNG tNG to read this chapter and you cut it short? ..::Sniffles::. Pleaz Update as fast as you can.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 15, 2004
    I would've commented on each chapter, except that I read them all in one fell swoop -- greedily as if with a large gooey chocolate cake. This is a bit like cake... delicious. I'm enjoying your take on the entire story... Severus is so very much in character ... and bending slightly. Hermione is as pragmatic as ever. I like where you've gone with is, and I'm looking forward to your next chapters.
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 14, 2004
    Ah yes, the Shopping Trip From Hell. The only thing really needed to make it complete would be for them to run into Molly Weasley, who would naturally attempt to take it over ('just to help a bit, love!'). I'd pay money to watch _that_ one!
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  • From ANON - fanficassassin on February 14, 2004
    This may seem to you to be picky, but I would point out that the ENGLISH civil war occurred a lot earlier than the American civil war, which I surmise is the one you are referring to when talking about the dress.
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  • From ANON - raija on February 14, 2004
    Remind me to never take mum with me whille shopping wedding dresses.
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  • From ANON - FriendlyQuark on February 13, 2004
    When my roomie got married we went through magazines for months and ended up making her her dress. The fashions for wedding dresses are appalling these d I c I cracked up over this chapter and it was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 13, 2004
    Chapter 11... This is so sweet, but frustrating for the girls, having her mother help her find a wedding dress!!! I am really looking forward to seeing how their ceremony goes, hope she knocks Severus off his feet!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

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  • From ANON - FriendlyQuark on February 12, 2004
    This is really cute. I mean that in a good way. I like how sensible she is and how you have him snarky and uncomfortable but not cruel. They seem to be handling the situation with admirable aplomb. Since Draco petitioned for her, is he acting out of jealousy or sour grapes? I would be interested to know more about his and Nott's reactions to this.
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  • From ANON - brittni on February 09, 2004
    i love it! i laughed so hard at severus' reaction to the wedding magazine. keep going, its quite wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Talia on January 27, 2004
    You have got to continue before I go completely crazy!! I am loving the hell out of this story!!

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  • From ANON - TESA on January 18, 2004
    Wow, I left this story at chapter five and was very plesantly suprised to find five more chapters less than a month later. It's developing excellently and I can't wait to read more about their relationship. The wedding magazines were too funny. I can just see Severus taking off Hermione's garter and throwing it in the crowd. lol. Cheerio, TESA
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  • From WriterLady1031 on January 16, 2004
    I love this story! I thought it was cute when Severus was completely disgusted by the bridal magazines and when he was asking if Hermoine wanted all of that. BTW, I totally agree with Hermoine-- a small ceremony is the best and it's cheaper! ^_^

    Anyhoo, update when you've got the chance!
    Ciao^_^
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  • From ANON - kallie on January 15, 2004
    This story is a very enjoyable read. You have kept both Snape anrmiormione in character quite well. I think you're doing an especially good job with snape. I guess my only bit of criticism is Ron's reaction to the whole situation. I think that he would be a bit more upset with the marriage since it seems he and Hermione were involved romanitcally before the start of the story.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on January 14, 2004
    Just wanted to say I love your story. Everyone seems very in character, and I can't wait to see how Hermione and Snape's relationship progresses!
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  • From ANON - giova on January 11, 2004
    Wonderfull, I am really enjoying this!
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