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  • From ANON - Estrilda on January 03, 2004
    Great story - fireworks and a bit of communication - more, please.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 02, 2004
    Oh I don't think an expended version is necessary really. Pomfrey thought she was doing her job, but the reality is once those "students" are married what goes on is none of her damn business and she should not have forced any of them to what she did. It should have been individually and private! But whatever! I still feel horrible for Hermione and I hope things will eventually look up for her! I am also hoping you will update again really soon! :cD
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  • From ANON - JennD on January 02, 2004
    What a fantastic beginning!! I have loved some of the plot twists that this challenge has brought to many fics, however - I have read too many which make me rolls my eyes and shake my head. This story is a pleasant surprise. This is how I see Snape acting...this is how I percieve Hermione acting - and it is a refreshing change. I enjoy reading your writing style and am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 29, 2003
    So he knows how it all works - huh? Is he going to share this knowledge -- soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 29, 2003
    Poor Hermione. Thanks for the update.
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  • From WriterLady1031 on December 29, 2003
    Interesting chapter--I liked it a lot. Everything was good: the character and plot development is coming along especially well. I hope that you continue the story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter. ^_^

    Ciao ^_^
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  • From ANON - SecretelySeverus on December 28, 2003
    hahaha... that's priceless... he's "well aware of how it all works..." hahaha... how wonderful. You're doing a great job with this story, it's funny, and has great potential! As I was reading chapter 5, chap 6 was added! And that was awesome :) Thanks for the updates, PLEASE coue wue with this story, i'll continue to check daily!!!

    ~Leigh~
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  • From ANON - Rilla on December 28, 2003
    I get the feeling Hermione is not going t hap happy next time she talks to Snape. hehe.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 28, 2003
    There is no way in hell I would have let Pomfrey make assumptions like that about me! Or tell me that I had to be on birth control no matter if it was for my own good! I'd rather have Snape make the potion or make it myself then go to her for it! And I'd be damned if I'd let them all think they had "consumated their relationship" as she so put it! What a bitch! I can't blame Snape for refusing to show up or accept the literature! I would never put up w/ that and I think it's appauling that Dumbledore is making her put up w/ it! Has she put up w/ enough?!
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  • From ANON - GEmory on December 28, 2003
    Oh, someone please smack Madam Pomfrey. She sounds like she's going to br exactly like Malfoy and other students in regard to her attitude to Hermione. Funny how in these stories everyone always forgets that Hermione is being forced into marriage. LOL. That conflict that make the challenge stories more interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anna Marie on December 27, 2003
    I'm really enjoying this and look forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 26, 2003
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - Raven on December 24, 2003
    goddess this story is so good! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 24, 2003
    I still like this story....I am hoping to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - raija on December 24, 2003
    This is one of the best marriage law stories that i have read. And I would be glad if you continued.
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