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Reviews for On Marriage

By : snailexpress
  • From ANON - Droxy on December 24, 2003
    This is nicely done and it's your first fic. Forced marriage romance is not easy as a first venture. It is a touchy journey of two people coming to terms with each other, especially someone like Snape. It's not the same as boy meets girl. Much of that journey depends on whether you have a happy ending or not.

    Snape is a difficult character, and I liked that FINALLY someone went to Hermione's paraents and explained it, and they ranted in a way one would expect. I give you a major plus that her parents challenged Snape on her education.

    It was very interesting to see Snape slip into the "sincere role of protector', but we all know his spy skills and I wonder if this was just an act toplacate teh Grangers and he is going back to his normal nasty disposition with Hermione. Will he keep his promise to the Grangers concerning Hermione.

    The other event is when Nott or Malfoy meet up with Snape.

    It seems you've given them some time between the engagement and the wedding, this is good, it gives them a little more time.

    My only advice is to keep in mind that Hermione is Gryffidor, I don't expect her to be totally reduced to a crying mush under Snapes harsh demeanor. We still don't really know Snape's feelings in this either. Was he really coerce Dum Dumbldeore?
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  • From WriterLady1031 on December 24, 2003
    Very interesting! I hope that you continue!

    Ciao ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tesa on December 24, 2003
    AWWWW!!!! That was so gentlemanly coming from Snape! I can't wait till the wedding date. Have yoen gen generous or what? Updating so soon! Thanx! I love this story! Hell, I love Hermione/Severus stories. lol. Brilliant! Please keep me informed as to any updates.
    Luv,
    TESA
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 24, 2003
    Well at least that when well. I still feel sorry for poor Hermione. He Barely speaks to her. He's never around. How is she supposed to get used to the idea if he avoids her like the plague. Still this is a very well written peice and Snapes avoidance and attitudes are quite in character! I look forward to readding more!
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  • From WittchWay on December 24, 2003
    Excellent story. Looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - bansidh on December 24, 2003
    I like the balance that you have achieved in Hermione's parents' reaction. So many respondants to the WIKITT challenge have either had them accept too quickly and unreservedly or else not convinced you that they have an ounce of sense. Hermione is their child; she gets her common sense from them. I also enjoyed her finally coming to terms with the situation in the library. I'll be looking for the next updathankhanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 24, 2003
    The scene between Sev, He, Hermione, and the Grangers was excellent! Brava! : ) All of this story, in fact, has been very enjoyable. I look forward to reading more.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 24, 2003
    Just finished chapters 4 & 5... Things are starting to take a bit more shape now!!! ealleally like how the conversation went with Hermione's parents, Sev really surprised her a lot!!! After this I would guess that they will be making some effort to learn more about each other which should prove quite interesting!!! Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - otherside on December 23, 2003
    ooo another challenge response!!! i love your story so far, expessially snapes cool detatchment from the whole thing, and then whipping out that awsome ring for her. i'm sure he'll warm up ;)
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  • From ANON - LadyPeregrine on December 22, 2003
    Oh he sounds SO enthusiatic. I can't wait to see what happens next! And I want to get to the romance! The story sounds fsic sic so far, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Tesa on December 21, 2003
    yay! Another chapter! Poor Sev doesn't seem too thrilled about the whole arrangement. I'm glad you've kept them close to their characters though, as opposed to all in love all of a sudden. Can't wait to read up more, even if it's after Christmas. I'll probably really busy myself! Everybody's going crazy with last minute X-Mas shopping!!! Have an awesome X-Mas!
    Luv,
    TESA
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  • From ANON - SnapeLover on December 21, 2003
    Am enjoying this story. Please update regularly!
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  • From ANON - merryday on December 21, 2003
    Adorable, I love a well written prickly Snape. Both characters are very believable. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 21, 2003
    Oh this is going to be slow and painful. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 20, 2003
    Good start, enjoyable and promising. Looking forward to the story unfolding in future chapters. Keep up the good work and thank you for writing.
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