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Reviews for On Marriage

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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 20, 2003
    LOLOLOL Caught while making good his escape. : )~ Love it. Well done on the last two chapters. I definitely look forward to seeing more of your y.
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    Kiri
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  • From ANON - wizardingangel on December 20, 2003
    great story keep up the great work

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  • From ANON - Rosmerta on December 20, 2003
    Excellent beginning! I can't wait for more. Please do let us know at WIKTT when you update! You have Hermione and everyone well in character, and you have a great writing style. A small nit - it's "free rein" (as in horses) rather than "free reign"....
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 20, 2003
    I just read chapters 1-3 of your story & you have done a WONDERFUL job so far!!!

    I have been reading many of the Marriage Law stories & each one is different. It's hard not to come upon a couple of things that are similar in the stories when everyone is working with the same things. Because of that fact I am really amazed that they are all different enough to know that the authors have tried very hard to make the story their own. Your story is no exception!!! You have added things that are different from the other stories I've read & have shown that you are making this story your own!!!

    I look forward to seeing where you take it from here!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - RSchneider on December 20, 2003
    A very good begining. I hope to see more in the future. Your writing is very nice. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - McHell on December 20, 2003
    It's going good so far! I like tak take on the situation. I like it that you began during the summer rather than during the school year. Makes it a big more personal I think. I'm looking forward to reading more! I LIke the added touch of the family ring :)

    Super!
    Michelle
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  • From ANON - LadyTuesday on December 20, 2003
    I love this fic!!! So cute and definitely in character! Keep it going! And if you need a beta reader, let me know.

    ~~ Lady Tuesday ~~
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  • From ANON - Tesa on December 20, 2003
    YAY! Lol. I love Sev/Hermione stories! When I first thought about the pairing, I was totally grossed out, but after I read one story, I couldn't stop! They're really meant to be together! I love this challenge, it's the best! I'm already reading up on more than 5 takes on it, and this one looks really promissing! Could you please email me when you have another chapter up?
    Thanx,
    Tesa
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 20, 2003
    Poor Hermione. At least with this challenge she got have at least 50 different kinds of weddings. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Raija on December 20, 2003
    This is great.
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  • From ANON - Topaz on December 20, 2003
    Great story so far. I must say that your story is the first one I've read that finally explains why Ron Weasley couldn't marry Hermione. None of the many other stories I've read covered that point. I'okinoking forward to more of your story. Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on December 20, 2003
    *applause*
    Excellent beginning! I like that you've made Harry intelligent wnough to see the facts for what they are. Keepng, ng, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 20, 2003
    You've got a good start to this fic! Your grasp of the character's personalities is great and you write well! I am looking forward to your next update!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Eva on December 20, 2003
    Hi i really like the way you have chosen to write this story and how you portraye Hermione and how you ended this chapter was brilliant. Please please pretty please update soon cause i want to know what happends next *grin*
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  • From ANON - mary on December 20, 2003
    I like! Can't wait to see what happens in part 2.
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