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By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - Miki on July 18, 2004
    Finally!!! Uninterrupted, wonderful, mind-blowing sex! I'm so happy you updated. I really love this H/D fic so much, and didn't realize that you had updated. Much to my surprise and pleasure, you've made my Sunday afternoon simply disappear. :)
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  • From ANON - BobotuberPus on July 18, 2004
    I'd read this story up until chapter 9, and between RL and AFF going down all the time, I hadn't read anything else until you posted chapter 16. Am I glad I read through 7 chapters in one sitting---the one chapter with the owl attacks was definitely squicky and I can't imagine having read that and having to wait for the next chapter!

    I like how this story is progressing---the power play between Draco and Hermione is very erotic. I find your switching of POVs an effective way of telling their story. I appreciate the lack of the inane "Hermione's POV," or "Draco's POV" that less skilled writers are prone to include.

    There's a good balance of tension, eroticism, angst, and humor involved. Loved the scene in Dumbledore's office with the parents fighting and Mrs. Granger calling Narcissa a hag! Ha-ha! (Muggles-1; Purebloods-0) I thought I read that Narcissa was dead but when I looked back at chapter 1 it looks like you'd changed it (I think one of the reviewers pointed that out). Yes, I have to agree that I kinda like Narcissa alive---Draco needs all the allies he can get. Loved your description of the dogwoods in the corridor after the wedding---utterly romantic and yay for the smut in chapter 16. Great job with this story!
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  • From ANON - Raffy on July 17, 2004
    *fans self with trembling hands*

    Booooy that was absolutely f*ckin
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  • From ANON - Lessa on July 17, 2004
    Wow I think you really out-did yourself with this chapter. I loved the back and forth flow as you switched from one view point and mental voice to the other. It really enhanced the chapter. The Harry bit kinda blew me out of the water it was so unexpected. I'm also with Hermione on the fact the Dumbledore seems to have something up his sleeve concerning them. And ohhhhh was the sex hot. Made me glad I was parked right in front of the fan when I read it. Great job.
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  • From ANON - dana on July 17, 2004
    that was worth the wait but i hope that we dont have to wait too long for the next one the harry thing kinda creeped me out normaly i like the harry/hermione thing but it just didnt feel right well i guess cuz in this case it isnt meant too anyways cant wait for more keep them coming
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  • From ANON - deedee on July 09, 2004
    This chapter's ending was so cute and fluffy. I can't wait to see what happens when those hormones kick in.

    Thanks for notifying me with the chapter updates. I've changed my email address, it's now: dracos_hot@Yahoo.com.
    Keep those chapters coming:)
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on July 03, 2004
    What a beautiful chapter. I love it when they try to be mature about such things. :) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ning on July 02, 2004
    I love this!
    I think you have a fascination with marriages and tattoos.
    No worries.
    I love it anyway.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on July 02, 2004
    My dear, I just found something & wanted to bring it to your attention. I know that I haven't read the beginning of this in a while & when I went to the 1st chapter, this was the 1st paragraph... "Somewhere between my sixth and seventh year it happened. I can remember the exact moment when it did. It was the springtime and the breezes were mild and flowers scented the air. The threat of the Dark Lord had been removed and Lucius was in Azkaban, Narcissa was dead by her own pathetic hand. And I...for the first time in my short life, I was free." I had gotten so caught up in the FABULOUS little battle of the parents in chapter 14 & how well it all worked out that I had completely forotten that she was supposed to be dead!!! I really like the story the way it is now, with her alive!!! Anyway, just wanted to point that out & can't wait for your next update, Deb >^..^< llll

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on July 02, 2004
    I am WAAAAAAAAAY behind here & am hoping that you will be able to get through this review since it will look like one huge jumble (aff has been cutting off my reviews if I write them in more than one paragraph)!!! Chapters 14 & 15... I really like chapter 14 very much!!! I am quite impressed with how you had Draco go about keeping her from getting rid of his child, devious, yet serving the purpose!!! The involvement of the families, Severus' conversation with her, the fact that she showed her strength & didn't bow down to Draco or the other students, WELL DONE!!! As for chapter 15 you did a FABULOUS job on getting them to the point that she now wears his ring!!! I like how they really know each other so well & I have to say that I really am hoping that they will, even with their battle of the minds, come to truly love each other!!! Can't wait to see what Harry & Ron will say & really can't wait for the wedding!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on July 01, 2004
    Great chapter, BM! It
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  • From ANON - Kay on July 01, 2004
    This is an incredible story! I love it! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lessa on July 01, 2004
    WooooHooo you updated!! *doing happy dance*

    Seriously was quite impressed that Draco was actually feeling pinpricks of guilt over his behavior and YEAH for Hermione for making him propose for real. I think she let him off easy on the bended knee bit but it was most enjoyable to see him in that position and mean it. I really hope your next chapter has her take on his 'confession'. I can only guess what was going through her mind during it.

    Until the next time!

    Lessa
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  • From ANON - Ning on June 25, 2004
    *sigh* Very in character. *clap clap* And I think you like the fact for Hermione and Draco to get married. Not bad. ;]
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  • From ANON - Arissa on June 15, 2004
    Very, very nice chapter. The Grangers vs Narcissa Malfoy was priceless *lol* And my Draco is really a Slytherin old Salazar would be proud of, the trick with the newspapers was really evil *g*
    The situatuion certainly brings out the cruel side of Hermione
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