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By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 24, 2004
    Chapter 13... I was hoping that now that Draco knows Hermione would allow him to be a part of everything:( I am so curious to find out how he intends to 'rectify' things!!!

    I do like the way that you let people find out that she is pregnant!!! Minerva's reason for her to be in the hospital wing is very believable!!! At least there are only a few people that know, BUT..... Is that what Draco is going to do?!? Will he tell everyone that she is pregnant with his child & make it impossible for her to get away to do what she wants?!?

    I do hope that they will be able to work everything out in a good way!!! They have already spent too much time trying to be hurtful to each other!!! Can't wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 23, 2004
    Whew!*wipes sweat*

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  • From ANON - Arissa on May 23, 2004
    Amazing story!Bloody shame it took me so long to find it. But better late then never.;)

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  • From ANON - deedee on May 23, 2004
    Woohoo, you updated:) I'm so happy he finally found out about the pregnancy and that he feels guilty, but I don't remember him actually saying sorry to her. I liked how you had him compare his mating choice to a lobster's. I just loved this chapter. Will there be more smut on the way for the two of them? I'm really rooting for Hermione to have the upper hand here, because so far it seems that Draco's not experiencing nearly enough misery and worry compared to Hermione. Poor Hermione's been worried about what to do with the pregnancy and dealing with morning sickness (which doesn't even have to happen in the morning). I would just like to see him pay for the consquences too.
    I really enjoy Snape's part in this fic. He's seems to be the sarcastic voice of reason. lol:) I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 23, 2004
    Omigod! This ust ust getting better and better. What will Malfoy do? Will Hermione keep the baby? Will they finish their Newts? (Said in radio announcer voice).

    Update ASAP!!!
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on May 22, 2004
    LOL Draco is a crafty bastard, isn't he? Hehe. I love it! Can't wait to see the next installment. ;) I love this story. :)
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on May 17, 2004
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 17, 2004
    Chapter 12... I do so hope that 13 will be a lucky # for Hermione!!! Will Hermione be having another talk with Sevrus about all that has happened?!? Will she tell Draco about the baby?!? Can't wait to see what her choice of payback for Pansy is!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - All41 on May 17, 2004
    Great chapter just wow, didnt really move the story along as much but still very needed.

    you would think hermione would want to get even with pansy too, and her revenge was just blah atleast Draco put some thought into it instead of just hexing her. But thats why Draco is so good at being mean, so very methotical.
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 17, 2004
    Loved the chapter!!:) Draco's bad karma needs to come back 10x as bad as what he's doing to her now. I hope he finds out she was pregnant with his baby when he did that to her, so that maybe he would feel like an ass. Will he ever find out? With all the horrible things that haappeappened to her, shouldn't she have some kind of pend up rage that's about to become unleashed or some kind of mental breakdown? I justl tel terrible for the poor girl. My favorite part in this chapter was when she hexed him at the end. But I think he deserved more than that:) I can't wait to read more. Please update soon:)
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  • From ANON - Jules on May 16, 2004
    Holy Crap! Draco really means war!
    Thanks for the warning, although I didn't heed it - hopefully no nightmares about owls.
    Although I will have bad dreams about Hermiones experience at the clinic - how terrible.
    Just waiting for the whole truth to come out and have it throw everything topsy-turvy. Great story & look forward to reading your next update.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on May 16, 2004
    Man, that was wicked! That's a damn shame. :( What is going to happen when Draco realizes that he tortured Hermione while pregnant with his child? I thatthat he won't be so happy about that, hm? Oh well, interesting read. Please update soon! BTW, have you seen what Pansy looks like from the movies? I kind of pictured her like that, except the movie version, she doesn't look mean enough, you know? In fact, Hermione could easily kick her ass! LOL
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  • From on May 16, 2004
    I want her to hex Malfoy from here to oblivion...screw him!! NOT literelly of course. Please update.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 03, 2004
    Chapter 11... Things aren't looking so good for Hermione!!! I take it that Draco doesn't know by the way he was talking to Severus, did he not hear the whole conversation?!?

    I am looking forward to seeing what Draco wants from Pansy as well as seeing what Hermione will do!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Lorelei on April 28, 2004
    This story is really good. The the different PoVs from Draco and Hermione are also great. Your Draco is well written and I think his actions and thoughts are in character. But your Hermione is rather out of character, but that suits the story just fine. It's really sad that Draco doesn't know she is pregnant, now he is going to be all mean to her, while she has to figure out what to do about her situation. I also like that she is thinking about an abortion first, a least that's what I figured she wants to do in Hogsmeade. There are just too many fics out there where young girls embrace the idea of being pregnant way too fast.

    Waiting for another great chapter,
    Lorelei
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