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Reviews for Unrequited

By : gammiepie
  • From ANON - bamslittledeadchick69 on December 25, 2003
    Once again, a marvelous and beautiful story. t jot job-I like seeing Hermione strong and firey and sure of herself!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2003
    i'm hard
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on December 25, 2003
    I love the warmiormione
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 25, 2003
    Chapter 6.... Very Good!!! Hermione got to kill 2 birds with one stone, getting back at Ron & getting back the controling interest with Draco!!! I LOVE how she shut him down, but I'm sure she left him wanting much more!!!

    HAPPY HOLIDAYS, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Teda on December 25, 2003
    Bravo Hermione! The gal has mad spunk. Great hookup with Draco and fab story.
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on December 24, 2003
    chap 4:

    Girls do tend to act aggressively to discourage guys.
    But what Hermione doesn
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 24, 2003
    Alright, I had to do it. I have to comment.

    I love the little game of cat and mouse that's being played. Both think they are the hunters but are actually the hunted. Both think they have the upper hand only to find they've been one upped. I love that they are being kept on their toes by the other. Hermione, as you said in the beginning, is a little out of character, but I don't mind at all. She's all saucy, which is what I believe Draco could bring out in her anyway. I think this is a refreshing change from all the other fics that throw the same Hermione and Draco together. He wants her but he doesn't want her. She wants him and is going after him, if for nothing else but a shag. Despite what anyone else might think, I don't mind the Ron/Hermione thing because if it weren't for his jealousy over that then he might not have even cared about what she did or who she did it with. I love it. I love every part of this. Your writing style is amazing and I can't wait to read the next part.
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  • From ANON - R/Hr sucks on December 24, 2003
    Nice story.

    Though I had to skip some parts in the first chapter. The R/Hr sex scene to be exact.

    I *shudder* whenever I read a R/Hr sex scene.

    Love D/Hr.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 24, 2003
    I liked chapter 5. The fact that they thought to do things for one another (even with dubious intentions) was cool. And I liked how you had them know each other's preferences - maybe they thought about the other before the conquest began.
    Keep writing please.
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  • From ANON - Lessa on December 24, 2003
    Thanks for the update first of alSecoSecond... I had to start giggling when I read the first paragraph of ch.4. I could just seem him doing the mental sinster chuckle/hand wring thing so typical of cartoon villians... LOL what an imagine. And I loved Draco's bafflement of Hermione taking charge there. Knocked him back for a moment or two didn't it? ;)

    A very long squeal of approval for Ms.Brainy at the beginning of the chapter. I so adore it when Hermione is not a mouse. And the chapter ending was just perfect. Their own sneakyness backfiring kinda sorta looks like it's going to take them in a direction neither of them has planned on.

    Excellent chapters just excellent.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on December 24, 2003
    Omg... This story is great. Update soon! This story is so believable it's UNBELIEVABLE! Hehe... Update soon! I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - SlytherinLinzi on December 24, 2003
    I am thoroughly enjoying this story!

    Just one thing is bothering me. You switch from present tense to past tense frequently, and it can get a little confusing. Do you have a beta for your fic? If not, I'd be more than happy to scan through it for you.

    Anyway, this is becoming a very, very interesting fic and I can't wait see where you'll take it. :)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 24, 2003
    Thank you for another QUICK update!!! I really LOVED this, both thinking along the same lines, wanting to get over on the other..... just wait til they actually get together!!! I thought it was really nice that they both had the idea to do something to the other's room.... hoping they will think about it & end up meeting half way between their rooms!!! Can't wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - cookie35 on December 23, 2003
    yup! that was definitely delicious! hahaha! please update! i really love your portrayal of draco! hardcore hermione is great by the way! please update!
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  • From ANON - Fiery Slut on December 23, 2003
    chap 3:

    Ooooh
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