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Reviews for Legally Binding

By : Darkwriter
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 01, 2004
    I am hoping that all is well after your son
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  • From ANON - Village Mystic on April 01, 2004
    Your story has interesting dimensions to it so far. The physical abuse aspect is very interesting and important in the psyogicogical dynamic and I hope you follow up on it some more.
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  • From ANON - Village Mystic on April 01, 2004
    Well, at least the marraige law didn't say people had to get married at any specific time, just that when they did get married it had to be to someone they were'n't related to. sorta.
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  • From ANON - Village Mystic on April 01, 2004
    Nice job with this variation. cha characterization so far.
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  • From ANON - sharkdiver1980 on February 25, 2004
    This is awesome so far! please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Lorena Snape on February 25, 2004
    Dagny T. - You're quite welcome. *grin* I only hope that Demosthenes, and others who 'review' in like manner, will consider it as well...

    ~ LS
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  • From ANON - Dagny T. on February 25, 2004
    Wonderful story, hope con continue.

    oh, and-

    (in a sarcastic drawl worthy of Snape) thanks for the lecture Lorena.
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  • From ANON - Lorena Snape on February 25, 2004
    Ok, I just read through the other reveiws here, and would like to apologise for asking you to update. I will try to be more patient, and when you do update, I'm sure it will be worth the wait.

    Now - to you other reviewers who are bitching for an update: Lay off. Encouraging a writer is one thing, nagging is another. True, I have asked for updates too, because I think this is a really unique and well-written fic, and it would be a shame to see it abandoned. But some reviewers (no need to name names) are being rude, and outright badgering the author. Do you actually think that will help get you a chapter faster? It won't. If anything, you risk pissing the author off. We readers have no idea what is going on in the personal lives of these authors, or what constraints they are under. No amount of either bitching or begging will change that. An author should not feel as though their fic is a burden, and they have to update because people are expecting it. An author will appreciate encouragement far more...


    ~ LS
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  • From ANON - Lorena Snape on February 25, 2004
    Still checking back, hoping for an update. *sigh*

    This is one of the more unique responses to this challenge, and is very good. I really hope you continue with it.


    ~ LS
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 23, 2004
    I'm a recent HP fanfic fan. I have been reading SS/HG ship for rough mon month, and I must say
    that this particular fic is a lot better than those others with the marriage law. I do applaud your
    use of words and sentences... they really make the story so intriguing and realistic.

    Mmmm... I think I like your idea of a female Snape, and absolutely love your idea of Harry Potter's
    animagus form being the one to kill Voldemort.. since honestly the boy doesn't seem so capable in
    my own honest opinion.

    You're making me wonder if Severus would bid for Hermione though... he being a Snape and rumored
    to be of an older Pureblood family than Malfoy.
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on February 14, 2004
    Oh, please update soon. I really like Sarin. And a panther as Harry's animagus form. Curious though, black mutatations (panther) shows up in several species of big cats (puma, lepard, jaguar and maybe some others). Which one is he?
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  • From ANON - gsnape on February 13, 2004
    please continue this is one of the better responses to the challenge
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 13, 2004
    I really wish that you would continue this story. It was so well written. While I think many of the challenge stories are great, most have ss/hg married very quickly. Your story draws the suspense out and makes it feel fresher. Please update and let us all know how this ends..m sum sure that you are busy with classes, so do not feel pressure. Thanks for a great story!
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 12, 2004
    Holy shit.
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  • From ANON - tubin on February 12, 2004
    Your ideas are interesting, but you need to work on grammar and spelling. Spell-checkers do not catch it when your mis-spelling or typo ends up making a word, as when you typed "whole" instead of "hole". Such substitutions are quite distracting.

    Keep writing; when your syntax catches up with your imagination, you are going to be a fabulous author!
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