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Reviews for A Mixture Of Dark and Light

By : SuzumeSlashySlytherin
  • From bill560682 on March 22, 2009
    sex drugs and rock and roll, party on dude.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on April 20, 2005
    A nice turn of events, and a pretty good begining.
    BUT, please get a beta or use Word to check grammar and spelling - I wouldn't coment on little mistakes, but sometimes it's impossible to figure out what they are saying. And you tend to mix Draco and Harry's actions. (The Sorting Hat is an "it" not a "he").

    I complain not because I'm nasty or want to offend you - I just really would like to know clearly what Hary and Draco are doing and saying, because I liked the story.
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  • From ANON - redina on December 25, 2003
    Please consider asking a beta reader for assistance with your writing. There are forums at http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/forumdisplay.php?s=&forum8 a8 and also a listing of volunteers at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/glassesreflect/database

    Beta readers can be a valuable resource.

    Dina

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  • From ANON - zero on December 24, 2003
    very good. please write more.
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  • From ANON - Miss Lesley on December 24, 2003
    i NEED A CHAPTER 2, THIS IS A GREAT story. Draco/harry/snape is a great combination. Draco is not a sex slave, he is Harrys right hand man with benifits. Also he has healed Harry a lot. Draco needs to take snape as well. Keep going with this, it is worth it..
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  • From ANON - spikeprop on December 24, 2003
    This fic is kinda fun. Dominant Harry is so rare in fanfic that It's quite jarring when I find a fic with it. I really want to see where you're going with the story. Please keep it coming (or cumming as it were. LOL!)
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