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Reviews for Hex-Crossed Lovers

By : HPRndRobin
  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 09, 2012
    Love love love loved this!
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  • From pandoras on July 19, 2011
    Quite lovely. The dream was a welcome twist. I can honestly say thet I have never encountered a story such as this. Very well done.
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  • From Darkless on June 10, 2009
    Well, you had a great story developing, thanks to the many talents of various writers, then the last one ended it abruptly with a dream-sequence explanation and a very feels-to-be-too-soon romantic commitment between them.

    While in the 'dream', they made tentative overtures with the mutual agreement that more may be forthcomming, the last chapter broke the flow and ended it rather jarringly. The last chapter just doesn't fit. It doesn't quite meet the quality of the previous chapters either; it felt rushed.

    Personally, no offence to the last author, I would drop that chapter and continue with the original storyline. It was fresh and original, with the slower, more believable development of Severus and Harry's relationship...with the information needed for character development and change. I kinda feel cheated. The original plot looked like it was leading to a Voldemort-less future, while the 'ending' has all that still hanging over their supposedly rosy and happy future together.

    Wow, I didn't mean to rant (did I rant?) and I quite enjoy a good long story to one-shot appetizers, with lots of yummy angst. Overall I would recommend this to Snarry lovers. Good job.
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 03, 2006
    I found you in someone's recommended section and I'm grateful. This story was lovely and I look forward to reading the others you have posted. I hope you are still writing somewhere. Thanks for leaving these stories on line!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 25, 2005
    Is there a chapter missing in between 7 and 8? I went to click over to chapter 8 and it didn't fit with the last one. Other than that it's a very captivating story.
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  • From ANON - smiley on July 23, 2005
    Lovely story! *smirk* can't wait to enjoy reading more!!

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  • From ANON - harryhollow on July 23, 2005
    please e-mail me when ever you update soon!! LOve your fanfic!!
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  • From foxracerchick129 on April 03, 2005
    Ooh another one of your fics i absolutley LOVE!!! So sweet! ... I was really surprised by the whole dream thing, very good idea. And I loved the end, I knew Albus was barmey all along! lol
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  • From ANON - amethystangel on October 16, 2004
    Terrif story... and it's nice to know that Ataraxis straightened out the chapter confusion. I was beginning to think you all had mislaid ch. 2.
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  • From ANON - Irihi Safaia on September 29, 2004
    *shrieks with laughter* yay! *bounces and claps* you guys rock! *twirls* talkin' castle! woohoo!
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  • From ANON - tata on September 26, 2004
    i love it!

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  • From ANON - blubb-blubb on September 26, 2004
    finally an update! about bloody time! so, Lupin seems somewhat safe. that's good. what happened to Draco? and the castele - why did it had to interrupt! They were about to getting onto it. *grrr* Hope more comes soon.
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  • From ANON - Jessyka on September 24, 2004
    You stopped?! How could you stop at there?! Update soon, Update soon! Please!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on September 09, 2004
    Interesting indeed, I will wait for more indeecd after reading chapter 6
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol (too lazy to sign in) on September 04, 2004
    Interesting situation. Veell ell thought out. I always thought Draco had more brains than to follow old Moldy-Warts, though.

    I can't wait for the next installment!
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