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Reviews for Last Hope

By : ShiSaiyan
  • From ANON - Jade on February 21, 2003
    what you can't stop there?!! Please don't wait another month before updating.... LOVE this story! The idea is organ. PLEASE POST MORE SOON!! As to the other universe thing... does that mean that the olders are here to stay? LOL
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  • From ANON - daemonwolf on February 21, 2003
    Yea, I know, it's been a while since I reviewed. *chuckles slightly* seems to me I've had a bit of 'reviewer's block' if there can be such a thing. Anywho, I just wanted to say how impressed I am with your work. You seem to have found the perfect balance of plot and sex, something that can't be said too often about the writers here. No offence to anyone, and I know the requirements of fics on this site, but some of them seem to have something along the lines of: "And then Harry ravaged Hermione," or "In a fit of passion, Draco and Harry fell to the floor and analanal sex." *shudders* So... back to what I was saying, *ahem*. I believe a congradulations is in order. Congradulations on an excellently written piece of fanfiction so far. I expect nothing less of you from now on. :) So until next chapter... or review, depending on which comes first....
    This is Dae, signing off.
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  • From ANON - Dream on February 20, 2003
    Dont stop!! Need more... to bad about the younger folks but i'm sure Brown or Pat can help them out....WANT DRAGON AND HERMIONE TOGETHER!! ps...YOU ROCK
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  • From ANON - LiL sLiXx on February 20, 2003
    I really like this fic and everything because a few reasons. 1. It's got one of the most original plots for HP I've ever seen. I never read a fic where the older Hp cast goes back to meat their younger ones. and 2. Because its written fairly well.

    I think you need more paragraph brake so that its easier to read though. More paragraph brakes good, one big paragraph bad. I don't like the fact that Ginny is with Gryff. I'm no H/G shipper but shoudn't Ginny have been left with Harry. I mean if Ginny's virginity was taken by Gryff then Harry (younger one) would never have gotten to take her virginity. I know that they're the same person but you know that everything the older ones do, effect everything for when they get back to their time.

    Because Gryff, Pheonix, Nikki, and Dragon will eventually have to go back to their time. That would leave Hermione alone and not interested in Ron anymore because of Dragon. Harry without Ginny because she will want Gryff. They're literally the same people but not reall because they're different. I don't know if that made sense but there is a pretty big problem with your relationship plot in the fic. So if you think about it Hermione, Harry, and Ron will all be alone because Hermione would want Dragon and Ginny would want Gryff.

    You really need to think that over a bit. I know I have. But besides those few flaws its very good. It's got real potential and i hope to see your work improve a bit.
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  • From ANON - EvilZedral on February 19, 2003
    I'm glad I signed up for the update notices. This is progressing nicely. I am hoping that the next installment will see ioneione and Dragon becoming better acquainted ;)
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  • From ANON - Dream on February 18, 2003
    More, More, More, More, More, More, (getting it) More, More, Now PLEASE!! PLEASE begging here!! Love this FIC!!
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  • From Cupiditatis on February 18, 2003
    More! More! More! Please! This is too good to stop there so suddenly!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on February 02, 2003
    Please do write more of this. I didn't expect to be as enthralled as I am. You have a keen sense of the characters and what they might be like as adults.
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  • From ANON - Jade on January 19, 2003
    Love, love love it. NOW please update very very soon... i would like Dragon and Herm together. Make it a long one if you can. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Dream on January 13, 2003
    MORE, hopefully very very soon!!! PS you could post this in Fanfiction.net under R. I know alot of people would read it.... Thanks Dream
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  • From Cupiditatis on January 12, 2003
    Oh Please, more! SO now, he saved her and???? What's going to happen??? Please write more!!!!! This story gets better and better!!!
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  • From ANON - Lena on January 11, 2003
    Oooh I like this one very much. I feel so bad for everyone involved. Keep up the awesome writing. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Dream on January 11, 2003
    WHAT!!! You can't leave it there... we need more, hopefullly with Herm and Dragon. I hope you have him get Filt! Thanks
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  • From ANON - Shadowsong1 on January 09, 2003
    Hey, this is a really great Story : ) Hope you date up the next chapter soon.
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  • From Cupiditatis on January 05, 2003
    AHHHH! Don't stop there like this!!! Please you have to update soon!!!!!
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