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Reviews for The mirror.

By : driretlan
  • From ANON - dave gerecke on December 29, 2003
    Not bad.
    spelling and use of words needs to be checked.
    See below:
    "Hello Neville, forget the password agen did you?" asked Dean - see the word agen. Should be again.
    But if you write more - I'd like to read it.
    dave
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  • From ANON - Joelle on December 29, 2003
    You could use a beta, but that was very pretty. And very original without being unbelivable. Good job!!!
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