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Reviews for Hogwarts Chemistry

By : slash
  • From ANON - innocent camels on December 12, 2005
    How I ever got my rocks off
    Prophet Muhammad and Paedophilia+Some sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

    From "The Life of Muhammad"

    After Khadijah died, Muhammad dreamed that he was to marry A'isha, the daughter of Abu Bakr. She was six (6!) and he was fifty. But firstly he married the widow Sawdah who was very motherly towards his children and, a few months later, to his child bride A'isha. She continued to play with her dolls for several years until, at the age of nine, her marriage was consummated.

    Rights of the Child (contd)
    10 Aug. '00 Reformers in the Iranian parliament are seeking to raise the age of marriage for girls from 9 to 14 and boys from 15 to16. Currently the girl's age is determined by the A'isha/Muhammad marriage. She was six and he was fifty - he did "wait" until she was nine to consummate the marriage

    Penetration of young girls can seriously damage their reproductive organs, let alone any psychological harm it can do. The high maternal mortality rate can be directly attributed to this practice. Also children need time to have a childhood and also study.

    For more on pedophilia "Sayings of Khomeini" . Warning the words of this "holy" man may cause you to vomit. Their authenticity has been verified. (See links on article.)

    Some Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

    Ayatollah Khomeini:
    A man can have sexual pleasure from a child as young as a baby. However he should not penetrate, sodomising the child is OK (Huray for Khomeini, what say you to that, my fellow firm believers?). If the man penetrates and damages the child then he should be responsible for her subsistence all her life. This girl, however does not count as one of his four permanent wives (Join Islam: fuck them raw and get away with it!). The man will not be eligible to marry the girls sister. (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990, Excerpt: Page [1])

    It is better for a girl to marry in such a time when she would begin menstruation at her husband's house rather than her father's home. Any father marrying his daughter so young will have a permanent place in heaven (and seventy more virgins to take in bloody sodomy!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990 [Mohammad (founder of Islam) The Pedophile])

    A man can have sex with animals such as sheep, cows, camels and so on. However he should kill the animal after he has his orgasm. He should not sell the meat to the people in his own village, however selling the meat to the next door village should be fine (11!!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990)

    "If one commits the act of sodomy with a cow, a ewe, or a camel, their urine and their excrement become impure, and even their milk may no longer be consumed. The animal must then be killed and as quickly as possible and burned." (The little green book, Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini, Political, Phylosophica, Social and Religious with a special introduction by Clive Irving, ISBN number 0-553-14032-9, page 47)


    Marriage with children
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  • From ANON - Slashybabe on January 08, 2004
    Sorry Anon, but I don't get what you are saying. Sort of...um...unclear on your warning.

    -Slashybabe
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2004
    Wow. Rapidfire gratui(sic(sic? It's late) smut. You have quite a vocabulary, but beware, for you toe a fine line between smut and pretentious smut... Just be careful, hmm?
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  • From slash on January 03, 2004
    Thanks Winky. And you are right. See a lot of the first chapters I had created for a certain site that was having difficulties with slash. More in general, gays and lesbians. Anyway, a lot of the chapters were written to either grosse people or or just get them warmed up to the fact that slash is here, queer, so they better get use to it. Anyway, I will try to buck up on my reviews and get better at writing. an, an, that is what I am here for. And to tell you, there are so many pairings, I don't think I'd be able to fit them in the summary. Anyway, I'll get to writing more chapters. A lot of these are just re-posts. Again, thanks for the review and for being so truly honest. It serisouly meant a lot.

    -Slashybabe
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  • From ANON - Winky on January 02, 2004
    Okay, I'll give a review, seems it doesn't seem fair that no one else has so far. You should probably give some indication of all the different pairings in your story, so the people who are into those kinds of ships will know what they're going to get. There are so many different kinds of personal taste for this sort of thing that it's possible you just haven't reached the right audience yet.

    I had a quick look at all the chapters, although I didn't read them as carefully as I might have done because I don't happen to enjoy slash that much (and especially not incest). I like PWP just fine, but it's sometimes more interesting if there's a liitle more build-up before the act (and after), a little dialogue between the characters before they jump each other. I think imp improves all kinds of smut and makes it more emotionally satisfying. Some of your scenes seem a little rushed, maybe you could add more detail in what they do and say. Reread your work and see if you have really developed a complete picture in the reader's mind of what you envision happening in each scene.

    Don't be discouraged by the lack of response from others. You should just write what appeals to you (whatever ship, style, act that you would enjoy) and use this as experience to develop your craft as a writer. When you're happy with what you've written, then you'll start getting reviews from people who enjoy the same thing.

    Good luck and keep writing!
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