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  • From ANON - NegativeNine on January 15, 2004
    LittleBird. You are a dog. A lucky, lucky dogu wiu will share wonyou?you? She said you could. You lucky dog.

    Wow April, that was a pretty intense chapter. (I know I say that a lot, but I don itn it.) The scene at the end was probably the most... sexually raw and intense scene I've read in a long, long time. The neediness that they both displayed can be explored on so many levels, and it really opens this story up to some intense possiblilities. I c go go on, but sometimes it's best if I don't. Let me just say: Wow.

    ...well, that and: Sorry for using the word "intense" too much. But you get the idea I hope.


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  • From ANON - genrou on January 15, 2004
    *ahem* well.. i was gunna say something aobut how tortourous that world was for him...but um..i might beg to differ now...well not really cause he'll see the next moring. OH! and the slut thing- that had my jaw dropping and the line right after made it 10x better.
    hmm.. i wonder if he'll go on meeting sirious..and oh i wonder what wolud the other snape think when he sees what other people are dead in that world.
    cool..i wonder what will happen next. please write more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 15, 2004
    oh wow- two chapters. well i just got through 5. i was actually suprised that herm ione didnt believe him- not that blame her. and i guess astime goes on she's figuring he is telling the truth. its gunna be sad when he does go back to his wife though. well thanks.
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  • From ANON - SJL on January 14, 2004

    *reads chapter 6*

    Wow, that was... wow. Bravo, very well written indeed, I enjoyed Snape's confusion with this new world immensely. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on January 12, 2004
    A/N:
    Dear LittleBird,

    I'm touched by your lovely bribes. For your eyes only I will write a special epilogue and send it to you! Feel free to share it as long as you give me credit. I'll be glad to write this as soon as the main story is over.

    hugs, April


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  • From ANON - LittleBird on January 12, 2004
    Very interesting to see other Snape with his excited take on the world and Hermione's life. If they are able to switch back (ok, I may be conceeding defeat here --I guess-- that he is other relm and not crazy) then it will be interesting to see if Hermione will use her new knowledge of other relm Snape to bring out the best in her Snape. Lots of possibilities!!

    As for the bet... I'm sure a fine writer, such as yourself, could still add in a plot twist where he is crazy -- after all any slick talking guy can impress mom right? (ok, not my mom... but someone's mom right?) Anyway... to that end I will up the ante once again in hopes that the loony bin comes a callin for Sevvy.. Let's see... we are now at a bouquet of roses, a foot massage, and since you have the flu -- how about a "Hope you get well soon" care package. Tissues, appropriate pharmacy products, broth, a steamy video and a large obnoxious balloon screaming "Get Well Soon!!"

    Hope you feel better soon!!
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  • From ANON - NegativeNine on January 12, 2004
    Heh, I love the way that Snape gets along with Hermione's mother. Almost makes me wonder if he's finding a way to seduce this Hermione if he's trapped in this realm after all.
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  • From ANON - Serenbel on January 12, 2004
    I meant chapter 5... I'm syuch a dimwit sometime
    Se
    Serenbel xxx
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  • From ANON - Serenbel on January 12, 2004
    Hi, I'm really enjoying Mr Mir Mirror so far. I'm reading each new chapter the moment I receive the email from WIKTT. I haven't read a narrative like this one before, and I'll be interested to see where to take the story.

    I have one recommendation though: halfway through chapter 4 you describe Hermione removing Snape's 'knickers.' This word is usually used to describe women's underwear. I'm not sure if that's what you intended, but if it's not I would suggest changing it to underwear or something like that (you could even avoid the age-old 'boxers or briefs' question :) )

    I look forward to the next chapter.

    Serenbel xxx
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  • From ANON - lalaith on January 11, 2004
    I love this premise, it's a great alternative to the Time Turner fics - a superb premise for showing different aspects of the characters. Yay! Hope you feel better soon, I've been fighting the 'flu myself and can empathize! :p

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  • From WendyNat on January 11, 2004
    Great chapter! Loved the ending, with the other Snape telling jokes to Hermione's parents... can't wait to see what happens when (if?) she meets up with her real Snape again...
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  • From ANON - NegativeNine on January 10, 2004
    heh heh, memory like a steel thingy.

    Flowers? That was the best you could come up with? Flowers? (actually, that was pretty good. I'm just hoping the tone I use makes it seem silly and gives you doubts. "fear is the mind killer.")

    Alright, I'll see your "flowers" and raise you a foot-rub. That's right. A foot-rub. Because the only thing a woman loves more than flowers is a foot-rub.

    OhmanOhmanOhman, the Snapes are stuck in the worlds they're in? That's almost too cool for words, because then the side-bet is whether they're going to find a way to get back, or if they're going to make the best of a "bad" situation.... ohmanohmanohman. No matter how this ends it's going to be totally cool!

    heh, and the idea of Snape half in/half out the window is good enought to keep me waiting patiently until text ext chapter s uss us further into this story!
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  • From ANON - Demonic Angel on January 10, 2004
    I must say I love the plot you have going....looking forward to the next chapter.

    D.A.
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 09, 2004
    hmmm..interesting interesting. well i guess its up to hermione and alternate snape to get them switched, now. and i wonder wat snape is going to do in this new world he is stck in. write more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - gill on January 09, 2004
    This is very intriguing -- and Severus's description in chapter 3 of how he and Hermione got together made my jaw drop; I've never read anything like that before!
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