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Reviews for Marriage Law

By : teshara
  • From ANON - sassy on March 18, 2004
    i really like your story so far i think it is one of my favorites ican't wait tnishnish
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  • From ANON - Angie on March 12, 2004
    I've been reading the Marriage Law and your imagination is incredible! Good job!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 12, 2004
    Chapter 32 - poor Harry. The fishing out the window cracks me up, so does stud Dobby *hee hee* thanks.
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  • From ANON - Snapeaholic on March 11, 2004
    A litter of little Dobbys? *SHUDDER* :) Great chapter as always! Keep up the good work! I am sure going to be sorry to see this one end.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 11, 2004
    Chapter 31 - what's with Ginny, that's pretty scarey. It must be nice to have a funny MIL. Very interesting man dialogue at the party. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Loopy Loony Luna on March 10, 2004
    I wish I had the artistic talent to illustrate the scene where Severus was miming hanging himself behind his mother's back. Priceless!
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  • From ANON - tbj on March 07, 2004
    I'm enjoying this story, but you should really have a beta to give your chapters a once over before posting. In the latest chapter you have Madame Pince as the Mediwitch (it's Madame Pomfrey), you have Goyle married first to Padma and then later to Parvati, and it's Blaise Zabini, not Zambini. I've found other nitpicky little things in other chpaters, but I won't pick you to death here. Otherwise, good story. Will the Amazon prophesy come back into play?
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 06, 2004
    One question, did Greg Goyle marry both Patil twins? the little devil... Very nice, long chapter. I hope the do have a baby. thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Devil on March 06, 2004
    Great! But just so you know you said Madame Pince was the healer and not Madame Pomfrey so you might want to go back and change it other wise this chapter was fantastic!
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  • From ANON - squibby on March 06, 2004
    This is a delicious story! Excellently paced and well constructed

    Only one question - in chapter 20 you mention Padma Goyle then later Parvati Goyle. Did he marry both twins?
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  • From ANON - Sare Liz on March 03, 2004
    Whoh. Alright, I just discovered your fic and I have to say, I can't wait for chapter 30. Reading the chapters inbetween studying for my quiz (on a totally unrelated subject) was kind of weird, but also I strangely felt like I was getting quite a bit done. Multitasking taken too far, I suppose. At any rate, you write beautifully, and if you haven't figured it out already, all you have to do to erase a faux pas in your personal dictionary in Word is find the file that the dictionary is stored under (do a search in whatever folder stores all of the Word files used to run the program, and the dictionary will have some sort of sensible title, like 'dictionary'). Open the file, regardless of file extention, in Microsoft WordPad - this is a very important point. Open it this way and you won't get gibberish. Do a ctrl-F search on the incorrect spelling and delete it. (The file should look sort of like a word document, but filled with random words with spaces inbetween.) Save the file and you're good to



    Anyway. Back to the feedback. Wonderful! I'd never thought of Severus as a disenchanted Russian Orthodox. Very interesting tact to take. If you have questions about it, ask. Theology and liturgy are something of a hobby, though I am admittedly not R.O., I have interesting resources at my disposal.
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on March 03, 2004
    Very interesting chapter--I am really curious to know what else is in store for Harry and whether they will ble tle to fix his face. The part with Neville's grandmother was really awkward--I know that I wouldn't have known what to say either and I probably would have had a smile froze on my face just like Ron. Either way, I'll be back for more when you update!

    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on March 02, 2004
    wow impressive chapter and I love how you described hair's eyes that was wonderful... but I also wonder if he can summon the dark mark a................... well hmmmmmmm we shall see......... ... any way keep up with the excelent work.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 02, 2004
    interesting. thanks.
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  • From ANON - on January 31, 2004
    excellent! i loved it. really. one of the best fics i've ever read and best yet, you have ore than one chapter! the begining was a little hard to follow but it was worth reading. thank you for taking time to write this and i understand what u mean about being abit excluded and embarressed when you say something that flies over people's heads.
    kat
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