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Reviews for Marriage Law

By : teshara
  • From ANON - Frienuarkuark on February 02, 2004
    Dumbledore is going to kill him? What about Harry and Ron? My gods, they will be queing up to murder him! LOL Wow, that was really sweet and beautiful and wow.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 02, 2004
    Yum!! WEll d It It's been awhile since a straight het scene has had any affect on me at all. You managed it. : )~

    Can't wait for more.

    Had to laugh at the juxtaposition of the last two lines. ::snickers::

    Kiri
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  • From sinj on February 02, 2004
    awesome chapter. Liked the last line. More lemons soon?
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  • From ANON - Redone on February 02, 2004
    Cute names for the house elves, Cherv and Sloozhanka :)
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on February 02, 2004
    Oh - gods yes. He takes her to Faust and then he takes her - how perfect. Now I am completely hooked and you are obligated to be consistant and verbose in your updatesleaslease? [Makes little pouty face and sighs heavily]
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  • From ANON - spaz on January 31, 2004
    Is Harry going to die? I'm kinda sad. Hermione an amazon, now that not typical. Interesting, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 26, 2004
    Oooo! And we add more intrigue into the mix! "Lovely," she says drily. (from a character type perspective. LOLOL) From a reader's persective it's a good thing. Can't wait for more. : )



    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Dr on January 31, 2004
    A virtual rose to you for rapid updating!

    Love the new places you are taking us to.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 25, 2004
    Wonderful chapter! And congradulations on the 8000 mark!
    I like the little girls and how they know things...
    And I fear what would happen were they to have that dragon.
    Sadly I wince every time when reading Russian in this alphabet, my teacher was very clear on that being a huge sin if you ever do that... Funny, but hearing it almost every day for the last 8 years tends to leave a mark.
    So a bit of nitpicking. I think writing rozhdenia would be a bit better than the alternative as hte word doesn't have softening mark in writing and writing it with a j makes it sound like it does. And maybe Boka instead of Poka(which is all too much like poking... >.
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  • From philodoxfianna on January 25, 2004
    very good story... I can't wait to finish it! *grins*
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  • From tristar3149 on January 25, 2004
    excelent chapters and it gets batter as it goes along....keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 25, 2004
    Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - shaz on January 25, 2004
    i love this story but sev and hermione need fat slaps in their faces and to realise they are lustifterfter eachother and are madly in love, the suspence is killing me, please keep writting more great stuf

    hugs shaz
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 25, 2004
    Thanks for updating so much. Itis a real joy to find stories I like being updated.
    likelike some of the magic used in the chapter such as Sev peeling potatoes. I like the OCs. It is funny that Charlie gags when Sevs family says he is kind and a good guy.

    But when is he going to kiss her dammit!!! You said these two "had it bad" and the relatives are working on it. Time to heat up the rrealtionship please!


    LOL



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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 22, 2004
    I'm a bit starved for some romance. Thanks for the update. I'm not an experienced beta, I have one author, however, I am fast. I'm a document editor by trade, if you think I would be a good match for you, feel free to e-mail me.
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