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  • From ANON - Nancy on January 09, 2004
    Story is good so far. I like it. But wher is chapter 16?
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  • From GoldenFeather on January 08, 2004
    Hmmmm.... Russia.... intriguing. There is only one problem though... a chapter seems to be missing... perhaps an accident when you went to post it?
    Still Reading,
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Frolicking_Nomad on January 08, 2004
    Interesting and entertaining story. I particularly like that Snape's parents are a) alive and b) not monstrous. That's quite unusual in the realms of fanfic.
    Incidentally, Chapter 16 appears to have gone AWOL. Any idea where it ran off to?

    (Oh, and you also might want to know -- in U.K. English, "fanny" refers to female genitalia, rather than one's behind.)
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  • From ANON - Kristi on January 08, 2004
    I really like your story so far. Just one thing, the chapters skipped from fifteen to seventeen, and there is now a big gap in the story. Please repost so we can follow along. Thanks
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  • From libco on January 08, 2004
    Great story but what happened to chapter 16?
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  • From ANON - Ali on January 31, 1920
    Very enjoyable, but I feel compelled to point out that in Britain 'fanny' has an entirely different connotation. If you mean backside, say so. ;-)
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  • From Barrie on January 07, 2004
    I have been enjoying this a lot. I like Helga, what a sweetie, as befits the founder of Hufflepuff. Poor Sev, he is a bit of a perv, lusting after a young pretty girl, gods, that's so ...normal, how dare he? LOL
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  • From ANON - Liah on January 07, 2004
    there seems to bee a chapter missing....could you please post it asap??
    this is a lovely story and i can't wait to see wheen severus and hermione get some action..:P
    very well written with a good plot. please post the missing chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Annanas on January 07, 2004
    Really good so far! Keep going! Severus seems nicer than most other authors describe him,though :) like that. But where did chappie 16 go?
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  • From ANON - saintthistle on January 07, 2004
    I *love* this story, I can't wait for the next chapter, but one question... Are we missing chapter 16? The story leapt from Snapes bedroom in Hogwarts to their bedroom, I assume, issiassia and the numbering d't 't seem to follow either. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading the rest of this :)
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  • From ANON - lise on January 07, 2004
    good story - i rather liked the slow buildup, makes the story much, much more believable, and thus more... fulfilling? ;) i would be happy to read more
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  • From ANON - GoddessByline on January 07, 2004
    Now I'm confussed.
    I've been following this fic, but this chapter I don't get... Are they in Russia now? If so, there must be a chapter mig?
    g?
    If your chapter numbers are correct... Chap 16 should come before this one.

    Bibi, Sweden
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2004
    is there a chapter missing?

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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 07, 2004
    Sometimes they are too funny. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - BakaChan on January 07, 2004
    maybe its just me...but umm... thoes last 2 chapters dont flow.... did you maybe skipp adding one? er?
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