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Reviews for Catching Fireflies

By : PoisonedBlueberries
  • From ANON - Morgeth on January 04, 2004
    Loving it so far. Sounds like a winner to me. Maybe a dream that starts out as a wet dream but ends up as a nightmare? That would be my suggestion.

    Good Luck
    Jessie

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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on January 04, 2004
    Mmm... much as I adore the yaoi goodness, it'll be easier on Harry if we can force some sympathy, or even better, empathy out of him before we start whacking him over the head with Draco's sexiness. NOt that Draco doesn't do that himself as it is...
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  • From ANON - cofaym on January 04, 2004
    Well, you could simply have the dream morph from a nightmare (perhaps the noise is what wakes harry) into a wet dream? Hell, a wet dream about harry would be a nightmare to malfoy *grins*
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  • From ANON - who cares? on January 04, 2004
    Believe me, I've read a lot of those "Draco comes to live at Harry's house" type of story but somehow, this one is different. All I want to say is I love your story so please, update soon.
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  • From ANON - AngelFire on January 04, 2004
    gotta b wet dream!!!!
    great story!
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  • From ANON - PrideAndPrejudice on January 04, 2004
    ok first all. love the story. second draco should have a wet dream, always time for nightmares later. once again, love the story keep it up. kudos.
    PAP
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  • From ANON - Temptation on January 04, 2004
    Hi Default, why don't you combine the two? Have Harry wake up to Draco having a nightmare about Dudley putting the moves on him and Harry trying to calm him down which leads to maybe something good??? I just like seeing Harry's relatives getting their "just desserts".
    Something semi-horrible (gasp) just occured to me - is it possible that Harry and Draco are somehow related since he has to stay there for the summer or is just the "safest" place Dumbledore could find to hide him without endangering the Order or is the Headmaster trying to play all knowing Cupid again? (I have some issues with that wizard - kind of reminds me of a Santa, Cupid, etc all wrapped together and thinks he knows best for everyone. Reminds me of a show from the USA called "Father Knows Best").

    Either way, keep up writing, I'm enjoying the story.
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  • From ANON - nocturnali on January 03, 2004
    Good start. Interesting enough. Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Miss_HighSchool on January 03, 2004
    Hey, I like the idea you've chosen, you know Malfoy staying with Harry. You should go on with it!! I'm also new to fanfic, working on my first story. If you feel like it, send me a mail or so...Kizzezz, Miss HighSchool
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  • From ANON - Dee lenomdeplume on January 03, 2004
    You write well, but please do something about shortening the sentences and separating the paragraphs.

    This is a plot that is quite commonly used and I ouwld love to see how you con continue to write it. PLease, for all our sakes, make it realistic.

    Draco would not be tha same snotty boy as his parents have died regardless of his feelings towards them. And Harry...you get the picture..

    BOTTOM!DRACO IF YOU PLEASE :D :D!!!
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  • From ANON - C on January 03, 2004
    Although this is a very short Prologue, I have to say it's a great start and very well written. How are you going to have them develop their relationship? Fights in the beginning and hexing each other into oblivion or was everything they had before just a big front that will be slowly broken down to show their real feelings? Gah. I can't wait to read more. Please continue soon!

    -Ashleigh
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 03, 2004
    An intriguing beginning. : ) I would definitely enjoy it if you continued this story. I'd like to see where you take it.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - MaLady Verdi Molto on January 03, 2004
    I'm reading this. ^^; I think this looks like an interesting story, so far. Is it going to be a HarryxDraco fic? Oh, and if you'd like me to beta read this story for you, I can. If you want.

    ~MaLady Molto
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 03, 2004
    This is a very good story. One of the better ones on this whole site. Please update soon as I would enjoy reading more of this. Thank you for posting it for everyone to read.
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  • From ANON - sindel on January 02, 2004
    I like it, keep going! :D
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