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Reviews for What Good is a Heart

By : Varada
  • From Teda on February 20, 2004
    This story is freaking, unbelievably terrific. I think I've reread this hundreds of times. Not only is the intimacy betwwen Hermione and Draco sexy as hell, but the writing is addicting. I just had to review, I liked it so much! ^_^
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  • From ANON - El Draque on January 04, 2004
    awesome fic! I loved that whole church scene, wow if that were a real wedding...would've been beautiful..[evil grin] hahaha. Anyway, great story!
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  • From ANON - mrsLupin on January 04, 2004
    Have you ever read a book that is just soo wonderful that you wish you could use a memory charm on urself just so you can enjoy the book all over agian?That how a feel towards this story. I loved it! It was beautyful! Amazing! Everything I love in one fic. WELL DONE. You deserve an everlasting cookie.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on January 04, 2004
    Omg... That just made me cry... Or was it the thought of the ending of The Return of the King??? Have you seen that movie?! It's awesome! Best ever, I recommend you go see it! Anyways, I Loved this story! It was so good! But question... You had Ron looking at Ginny like that in the end... Ginny is Ron's sister... Um.... Kinda confused. Please clear this up for me in an email: Sweetiedjs2@netscape.net Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Alemap on January 03, 2004
    So does that mean he loves Ginny? Doesn't seem right but that's what I get from the last line. I will admit that your story made me cry, I'm not too big to admit to being a blubbery kind of person. It was really very good. Overall, good grammer, and expessive story telling. One complaint though is your use of repetitive words. Sometimes you would use force or forcefully more than once in the same sentence (sometimes three times), and not in parallel stucture either so it made for less interesting reading, not to mention it's not a good creative writing habit. You did this with the word full or fill (can't rememwhicwhich one) and some others, but I was distracted by the plot and the moving preformance between H and M.

    Loverly Job,
    Map
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 03, 2004
    What a beautiful story!!!! I loved every minute of it, even when he took her by force. One of my favorites, definitely!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 03, 2004
    OH MY GOSH!! had had so much emotion. So much... much... The way that... I'm sorry, it was soo good that my brain has short-circuted. I don't think I'll ever be the same again. But it was good. The best. Wonderful. Perfect. Magnificent. Stupendous. Mind-blowing. Heavenly.
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  • From ANON - Julili on January 03, 2004
    I actually started to applause at the last chapter.
    It was so beatiful it hurt!
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