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By : darc
  • From ANON - Kath on February 12, 2006
    This is a fantastic story it is good to read about Harry's younger life please keep this up and I hope you are going to update very soon.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 30, 2005
    Please update the story soon please i would love to read more

    angel
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  • From ANON - Christina F. on July 22, 2005

    This is the second of your stories I have read . And it is very good . I loved the way you
    described how Daylan was sleeping in his father bed it was so sweet. I really hope you
    keep adding to this story as well as you others. C.G.F.
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  • From ANON - angel on July 14, 2005
    i just love it .. i hope harry and draco become best friend and i hope all going well for them ... please update sooon i would love to read what will happen next ... well bye for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 06, 2005
    So, do Draco and Harry become friends? What happens next? Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Lee on May 13, 2005
    I think that a five/six year old Harry/Daylan is just adorable. The fact that not all of the cannon characters are evil is a nice touch.
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  • From ANON - magalud on August 22, 2004
    I am so glad I found your story. I hope you update it sometime soon. I love Severitus, and yours is delightfully inventive. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - June W on August 04, 2004
    Oh, I am SO glad to see an update to this story!!!!! I love the storyline and your whole alternate universe. Will you show us some Minerva-Lucius-Draco interaction also? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - n0b0dys_ang31 on August 04, 2004
    hey, momma-dar! it's me! n0b0dys_ang31! I just popped in to tell you that the telepathy conversations have been cut from chapters 2 and 3. I had to double check from fanion,ion, and theere is a who lot cut out. Just thought you might like to know!
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  • From ANON - hermionebrowneyes on May 31, 2004
    i realy like your storys and i was woundering if hermione will be in this story and if so will she be remus child or maybe blasia(or how ever you spell your name) ihope she in this one
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on May 31, 2004
    Hey, I wanted to tell you I really really love this story. But please you need to do something about your formatting. Your first chapter is formatted perfectly. You have your lines single spaced, you have your paragraphs separated by a space, its perfect. Why did you start putting a space in-between every line? Its doesn't flow well its a bit off putting. Sometimes people don't even put spaces in their stories, but this is too much. Please go back to your chapter one format. Your story will flow so much better. Even if the chapters seem shorter when you do that it doesn't matter, its a good story and people will still go back for theatesates.
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  • From slygriff21 on May 05, 2004
    The plot thickens! I can't wait to read what happens now that Jocelyn and Lucius have met. This is a great story. Please update again soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - crissy on May 04, 2004
    lucius doesn't seem so sinister. i like that.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on May 03, 2004
    Thank you so much for updating this. I'm glad you are still writing it. I really got into yours story when you first posted it and its progressing nicely. I'm wondering though if Lucius is a bastard in your story or if he will prove to be not so bad. I'm also looking forward to Draco and Dylan becoming friends.

    Please don't keep us waiting too long for another update.
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on April 03, 2004
    Your formating make the story very difficult to read on my palm. the umber of blank lines is the problem. Could you forgo the double spacing?
    dave
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