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Reviews for A Father\'s Revenge

By : JennaSlytherin
  • From ANON - Margaret on January 11, 2004
    AHHHHH! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! I've read so many D/Hr forced weddings already, but this is wonderful and did I mention I love it? Lol. Job very well done, and your Draco is veryy sexy. I like that you still incorporated a little bit of guilt before having the two of them ravish each other. That makes it that much more believable. Eee, I can't wait for more. When's the next update? ;)
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  • From ANON - Lessa on January 10, 2004
    Ok, like the story but I have a couple of things to nitpick/ask about the plot. Ok if they are still in school wouldn't the other Slytherins have know Blaise was pregnant last year and the other Gryffindors noticed that Hermione was not? Especially if the baby was six months old? And how long was Blaise and Draco married I didn't think they were old enough at 16 or so to get married.

    I sound really picky but I think this stuff is important. How did Draco go from being a mean grief-stricken revenge minded man to having fluffy feelings for Hermione so fast? We saw no interaction between Draco introducing Hermione to the baby and now he's concerned for feelings and just happens to design the perfect wedding dress for her?

    Just some questions I would like answers for.
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  • From ANON - hinkypunk08 on January 10, 2004
    This is an interesting story. I like the sexual tension between Draco and Hermione, though annoyed that they keep getting interrupted. You might want to put in a little description as to why Hermione is suddenly attracted to Draco---I'm hoping it's something beyond his looks. I like your description of Draco as a father to baby Blaise, though he seems to have gotten over Blaise really fast.
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  • From ANON - DanishGirl on January 10, 2004
    Great chapter! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2004
    wow this is really good ur a really good writer please continue i really want to c what happens next.

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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 10, 2004
    Man! Just when Draco and Hemione are about to get it on, Harry and Ron gotta mess everything up! Ugh! And I'm sure some of the hate mail Hermione received was from Pansy's ugly ass! Anyway, really good story as always. Please update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Kitten on January 10, 2004
    I love this! Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on January 10, 2004
    Oh... My... God... That was AWESOME! Update soon! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 09, 2004
    Chapter 5........ I do hope that they will be able to finish what they started soon;-)

    I knew that Ron & Harry wouldn't be happy, but I do think it's funny that Ron passed out!!! They were told to go away!!! I can only imagine what they must be thinking about the baby, can't they do the math or are they thinking that Hermione had used charms to cover a pregnancy?

    Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Serpent du feu on January 09, 2004
    Oooh
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 09, 2004
    oooooh, playing the role already. ^__^ wat excuse are they gunna come up with to say how they covered up her pregnancy? ill just have to wait and see i guess. please write more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 09, 2004
    oooo! Ouch! Me thinks the it is about to hit the fan. LOL I look forward to reading more. I especially loved Hermione's clng ong of the child.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 09, 2004
    another great chapter!!!~!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - Mel on January 09, 2004
    THAT is what I call sweet sweet revenge.... :D *giggles* Go Malfoy!! DIE RON!!! Well, fainted works too. :D
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 09, 2004
    I really love this story. Ron's faig wag was priceless.
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