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Reviews for The Dragon's Child Bride

By : Tygris
  • From ANON - afici0nada on December 30, 2006
    That was beautiful! It was well worth the long wait. :) I love the way you portray Laylani's and Draco's emotions so beautifully. That chapter had me crying by the time I was done reading it. Laylani is so desperate, practically at the end of her rope, and Draco's doing all he can to keep her.

    I sort of expected the ending; didn't think it could go any other way. Draco's going to be absolutely furious. I don't see how he can trust the Order after that incident. As for his fiancee, well, I hope she is able to hang in there. Gosh... I really can't wait for the next chapter!!

    Excellent writing, as always. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2006
    Of course, because DumbleDUMB decides to get involved and send the girl away from Hogwarts (one of the SAFEST PLACES ON MAGICAL EARTH), she gets kidnapped! I never did like Dumbledore, he always seemed to be just a LITTLE too good and a LITTLE too stupid in the J.K. Rowling books.

    Great story anyway, and one I hope is continued.
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  • From ANON - Dee on December 28, 2006
    OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD, AN UPDATE! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! XD

    Well, now that that's out of the way (pst, I love you... ^_^) I have to say that this was an absolutely awesome chapter. :)

    It was so heart-wrenching. An absolutely beautiful goodbye. Seriousy, I cried.

    And oh my god, the Death Eaters! Damn them! Why did they have to come along? Stupid Death Eaters...

    And Kingsley is a Death Eater!?! Whoa! But you knew that, didn't you. ;)

    Everything was absolutely fantabulous!!! ^_^

    I'm hoping at some point Draco will be so desperate to stop Lani's pain that he'll want to kill Harry himself, just so she doesn't have to. Not seriously of course, but just as a joke.

    Or a moment of pure frustration...

    Anyway, I absolutely loved it and I can't wait until the next update. Please, say it soon. ;)

    Ta ta!

    P.S. I love you...


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  • From ANON - Dee on November 15, 2006
    Oh dear, oh dear...

    This is so amazing I don't even know where to start. I know a lot of people have a thing against original characters but I actually enjoy them. It gives you a character to relate to when you can't relate to the canon characters. Unfortunately a lot of OC stories are poorly written and MarySue-ish. Your story wasn't like that at all. It was beautifully written (Absolutely awesome!) and well thought out.

    Best of all the characters were in character and yet you still managed to portray them in a different light just by changing the perspective.

    I love the betrothal idea most of all. Even though it's been done before you still make it completely your own by adding in all these twists. The fact that they knew each other when they were kids, Lani being kidnapped, Draco thinking her dead, the deatheaters, the prophecy. It was all just awesome!

    The conflict you came up with was also awesome. I love the idea of a second prophecy. The problems it brought to Draco and Laylani actually brought me to tears. I seriously cried!

    Then again I am a big cry-baby... ;)

    I love how Draco thinks of himself as a knight protecting his princess. It's like he has his own reason to be a hero, to be good. He does it his own way.

    Though he's a bit out of character I love how you portrayed Harry. He's been through so much I think it works though. Sometimes I wanted to smack him (I found that reaction quite funny) but then there were other times that you kind of get where he's coming from. Especially when it comes to Draco and Laylani. :)

    The thing with Laylani and Snape is also interesting. That was a nice touch.

    Anyway, I think that's enough for this review. It's gotten pretty long. O_O

    I hope you'll update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Ash on September 14, 2006
    It's been so long since you last updated. I hope nothing's wrong. I really can't wait to see what happens to Draco and Laylani. I hope you get a chance to post a new chapter soon. I'm really looking forward to read whatever you come up with. ^_^
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  • From ANON - clairependragon on August 15, 2006
    ohhhhhh please dont stop now!!!!!!!!!!!!! im loving this fic. keep going.
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  • From ANON - Doomsday on August 12, 2006
    I love it! I can't wait untill the next chapter! Draco is so awesome in this story. You've showed a whole new side of him while still managing to keep him in character. I can't wait to see what happens to him and Lani. I hope you're able to update soon.
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  • From ANON - AlhyDV on July 31, 2006
    I loved reading what you've posted so far. I can't tell you how nice it is to be able to read something that I don't have to guess at what the person is trying to say bc it's all misspelled and what not, portions are missing, the author skips around or writes it like they were quickly retelling a story. Very hard to find writers on this site that put actual feeling into their writing.

    Thanks again for the great read. I wasn't able to stop once I got started. =D
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  • From ANON - mona on July 31, 2006
    i cant wait for more untilll then i'll be waiting
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  • From ANON - jack on July 31, 2006
    keep up the more then excellent work and update soon
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  • From ANON - anon on July 31, 2006
    what going to happen with blaise he knows where they are if the somehow exscape
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  • From ANON - ash on July 31, 2006
    cool i really like your story keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Sai on July 25, 2006
    Wow. The way you wrote this story is just amazing its so easy for me to just get lost in it. I think that thats the mark of a good story, when you can read it and become so wrapped up in it that you practically feel what the characters are feeling. I really dont know what else to stay other than this story is just fantastic you have a real tallent for writing and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - a on July 24, 2006
    you have the best writign ever.
    please please please continur this story.
    i love it.
    its the best story ive read on this webb
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  • From ANON - Ash on July 23, 2006
    I love this story! It's one of my favorites. I love how you manage to keep Draco in charachter while still making him tender. The relationship he has with Laylani is unique and you've portrayed that well. Thanks a bunch for finally updating. Keep it up.
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