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Reviews for The Dragon's Child Bride

By : Tygris
  • From ANON - The Ultimate Otaku on January 11, 2004
    I LOVED chapter seven, LOVED it!
    Thank you for emailing me about the update. I appreciate it very much.
    This chapter, seven, was so emotional! We got hints of Laylani's past. To think of the power she has, wandless magic! That is so amazing, and such a unique idea. You would think that others would have thought of it, but I haven't read other fanfics where wandless magic is used. That doctor, the one that made Laylani angry, I don't like him. He doesn't seem to know what he is doing. On the other hand, this Mari lady is very nice. She reminds me kinda of Sprout, being short and having that jolliness about her. I like her a lot. It's funny how she said she didn't mean to clean up, but was sorry anyway. Reminds me kinda of myself sometimes.
    I think it's really good that Laylani got a woman therapist. I am kinda dreading when Draco goes back to school because I know he will be sad, and Laylani needs her knight in shining armor! I am angry that Lucius is considered USING Laylani for the Dark Side! That is horrible. That brings up the thought, what would Laylani think of the Dark Side? She would probably be against it. That also brings up, what does Draco think? That issue has not been hit upon in this fic. Yet. I am curious about that.
    Draco's comment about "I'm used to women falling all over me," that was funny, and so very Draco. Kudos to ya for making him say that.
    Draco is so sweet. The think about Laylani hiding in closets was interesting. It made me sad, because you can tell she has gone through a lot. It was a little confusing though. And there was a bit where you said 'head' and meant hand, because Laylani only has one head, but you put 'other head' or some such. I would beta for you, but I am in the middle of writing a buncha fics myself and would probably end up enjoying read the chapters so much I would forget to beta! Lol.
    I like how Laylani rushed to Draco's bedroom, and how he just accepted it like that. It is really amazing and sweet how they know each other so well, even though Laylani doesn't remember so much and is traumatized. Heehee, shirtless Draco! Lucky Laylani.
    Good chapter. Very dramatic and it made me very curious about stuff. I am very eager for more, could you please email me when you update again? That would be awesome. Good luck with writing more!
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  • From ANON - Raija on January 11, 2004
    This was absolutely best chapter(7) this far...Oh I hope that Narcissa and/or Lucius sees them sleeping together.
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  • From ANON - The Ultimate Otaku on January 10, 2004
    Oh my god, AUGH! Chapter six, the ending! HOW could you leave me in such a state?! What will Draco's reaction be? Does that mean she remembers who he is, or just that he's the nice little boy? Oh, I am DYING for the next chapter! I love this fanfic, it is so original, and well-written, and different than other fics I've read. I loved it from the start, there are so many original ideas and seeing how the Malfoys really are. I really love Draco in this fanfic, he is sweet, yet still fabulously in character. I feel pity for Laylani, and yet I am happy because she seems to make Draco happy and seems like a nice enough, albeit confused and traumatized, person. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please write more! Please email me when you update this fic!
    Good luck with continuing it, I am an ever devoted fan and will re-read and review again, and check up on this, to see if it has been updated (unless you, the author, email me when this fic is updated).
    Thanks for writing such an intriguing fic. I look forward wholly to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - The Ultimate Otaku on January 10, 2004
    Oh, chapter 5 was just too sweet for words. To think that the Malfoy family could lose composure so, could, deep down, have such emotion and strong feelings inside them. I love how Draco is so protective over her, so sweet. I think it's funny and cute that she woke up and just said, "Hi" and then fell back asleep. Somehow it seems much more suitable, happy, and fitting for the mood for her to have done that rather than panicking or something. I'm so glad Draco has someone to love. This is such a cool fic! I love it! I will continue reading and reviewing, and when there aren't any chapters left to review (I think there is one left right now), then I will beg for updates.
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  • From ANON - The Ultimate Otaku on January 10, 2004
    I loved this chapter four, it was so...I don't know what the word is. It was very well-written, and I like that Draco finally came into the fic. His emotions were expressed very well. I like the way you described how he is with his Quidditch team, it was interesting, in character, and just so veraco.aco. I could imagine his yelling "goddamnit!" in frustration so well.
    Pansy is such an annoying bitch. At least she can be avoided if Draco leaves. Too bad he is missing that match. Very suitable title for the chapter, because some things ARE more important than Quidditch.
    I can't wait to see Draco's reaction to Laylani being back. I hope she wakes up soon, too. Excellent writing, this fic is superb!
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  • From ANON - The Ultimate Otaku on January 10, 2004
    Oh, this is so intriguing. I love it! This is so creative, so unique, and well-written as well. Lucius and Narcissa have very strong personalities that are interesting to read about. I couldn't help but giggle at Lucius's "poleece." I hope the girl is not in a coma though. That would be aggravating. I can't wait till Draco enters the
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    This is very good, I will definitely keep on reading.
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  • From ANON - Raija on January 10, 2004
    This is great and you write well.
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  • From tristar3149 on January 08, 2004
    another greaat chapter this is going to be good....................as always keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - JennaSlytherin on January 08, 2004
    I honestly love this! I love the way you have written Draco's parents. They seem so vulnerable and confused... something you rarely see in fics now a days. I have to find out Draco's reaction!! It will be classic! Will she have amnesia? She has to remember Draco!!!
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on January 08, 2004
    I like this story and I like the plot and t is very well writen..............Draco's father personality on the nail. and Please up date soon want to see what happens
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  • From ANON - leylia on January 07, 2004
    this is such a nice story!! Please keep writing! It's a cool story and I can't wait until draco meets her!
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  • From ANON - JennaSlytherin on January 07, 2004
    Okay.. I freaking love this... please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Raija on January 07, 2004
    So you keep torturing...how clever now I am completely hoo So So please be kind and update.
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  • From ANON - mother on January 07, 2004
    You have my total and undivided interest. Please continue. I am dying to know who they tripped over.
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  • From ANON - raija on January 07, 2004
    And that unconcious body is leilani? Please update soon.
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