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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - FallenAngel on March 27, 2004
    Whoa...it took me ages to get through all those chapters, but it was worth it! This is one fic I'll remember to check on for updates. It was amazing! A bit angsty for a while...I was in tears when Harry was trying to sort through his feelings on Sev "raping" Ron...but it was so great! Please update frequently and I'll continue to review after each update! Oh...and would you mind looking at my work? No one ever does, but I'd like to have a good writer take a look at my fics. FallenAngel is my penname on the site. There's three of us, I'm the third one if you use search and authors. Please check out my stuff if you have the chance! And review if you do, I LOVE feedback! Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Chelsea on March 22, 2004
    Dear god you are killing me softly. I LOVE your story. LOVE IT. Though for some reason it had absolutely no apeal to me when i saw it on Fanfiction.net and avoide, bu, but ugh now I totally regret that. Amazing. Fabulous. Sexy. Ahhhhh yes.
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  • From ANON - crudedly on March 21, 2004
    i refrained a long time from reading your stoeveneven though i had heard so much of it... the length is just stunning! I was a bit afraid, i must admit, because i don't really like long stories where the couple gets together in the beginning and then stumbles from one stupid situation to the next. I am pleato sto say that your story is different! Despite the fact that Harry and Sev had something going on during the holiday, there were some serious things between them still.
    That is the long way to say that your story is wonderful and i'd love to read more of it! ;-)
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  • From ANON - CuriousGeorgette on March 19, 2004
    Just wanted to say how much I have enjoyed reading DETaH GREAT STORY! Love the premise.
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  • From ANON - Luna_Kat04 on March 19, 2004
    Wow, I'm so proud! I got a thankyou listed on someone's story:) This is a first! And from such a great author....I'm swooning. Great post yet again. The Charlevereverus interaction was sneaky ;p I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to Severus slipping his arm around Harry...What will Bill and Ginny do? They seem to be the only two who haven't figured out the new coupling yet...Waiting eagerly for your next post....
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on March 18, 2004
    Ah, another wonderful chapter. It reminds me so much of my own family parties.

    Another brilliant work you did was with Ginny. Being the eldest of three children, I know how it is to have the baby of the family kept as a baby for as long as possible. And with Ginny being the only girl and the youngest, I think that Molly and Aurther would not coax her to being an adult, nor act like one so that they could keep their little girl for as long as possible. It's not that she seemed spoiled, but her situation would deem that she may be emotionally and mentally yer ter than her actual age.


    Ari
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  • From ANON - Mara on March 17, 2004
    Okay, I'm going to stroke your ego a bit. I'm really enjoythisthis story. You have an excellent balance of adventure, angst and humoursidesidering most fanfics that I have read stick with just one set and then either a fluffy or sad ending.

    Regarding Chapter 48...I am looking forwards to Ginny's reaction to finding out her past crush is going out with her Potions Professor. I realize that this would possibly be just a side note, since the story centers around Harry & Sev.

    As I wait pleasantly for the next installment, what other fics have you written that I could read?
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  • From ANON - LustyMuse on March 16, 2004
    Yeah! *bounces* I love Sev playing on Harry's "jelousy"... Its not jelousy per se, just nerves, and their relationship is sweet without being saccharine...
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  • From ANON - Brad on March 16, 2004
    Hehe... It has taken me all weekend, but I have caught up! I totally love this and hope that you will update again soon. Sev in leather... sounds like a dream come ture...
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  • From ANON - Hermione2928 on March 15, 2004
    I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LIT!IIT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!I LOVE IT!


    BET YOU CAN'T GUESS WHAT I THINK ABOUT YOUR STORY!
    YOU GOT IT!
    I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - chocs on March 15, 2004
    Ok, I found this story on fanfiction aas tas tatally depressed when I couldn't find it there. Finally I found it here Yay!!!! I am so happy! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - jj the jet plane on March 15, 2004
    DuDe, i so love it!!! Severus is alll 'hanging out with the weaslys'
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on March 15, 2004
    Update soon please. Ughh I got to go before I have any more trouble typing.
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on March 15, 2004
    Quite a lot to handle in one chapter and yet, as usual, you handled it beautifully. I loved Charlie's reaction and insightfulness about Harry's lack of response to his kiss. And Ginny was priceless. Will she get a clue when she notices Sev's arm around Harry's waist? LOL.

    Oh, and I was wondering when the "F" would come up again. That was brilliant!


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  • From ANON - rubberduck on March 15, 2004
    whew, another chapter. finally. hehe. just joking. that was extremely long. no wonder it took so long. but it was good. i think i've said it before, but the banter and interaction between the characters is top notch. it's so believable and fresh. of course, there is something that bothered me. ginny. it bothered snape too apparently. i understand she's a year younger than harry, ron and hermione but that still makes her seventeen, yet she was portrayed as very young or immature. i can understand her reaction to snapes appearance a little. she didn't want her father dragged away to work, but stiher her actions were very questionable. anyway, i really liked the chapter and i hope the next one doesn't takelonglong.
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