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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - R.C. on February 27, 2004
    how can u do that?!?!? leavnig me on the edge of the mountain!!! update fast! ASAP!!!! ty
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  • From ANON - Introspect on February 27, 2004
    It's not often that a fic strikes my emotions, but this chappie made me bawl. I'm sorry...it's just so UNFAIR!!!!! Poor Harry, Poor Ron, Poor SEVVIE!! Waahhhhh!!!! Don't leave us waiting for the next chapter, PLEASE?
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on February 26, 2004
    AHHHHHHHH!!! YOU STOPPED!

    This has got to be one of the best cliff's I've read! You have the tension of the room, the chaos of third parties not really important to the plot, and the hidden meanings down to a T. Like that lust potion, you'd better relieve this suspence before I pop! ;P
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 26, 2004
    Wondeful chapter! Loved Severus' actions to both save Harry *and* manage to not blow his cover as Spy. Perfect compromise.

    And the scene in the classroom and flying were both fantastic.

    And I am *so* glad you said weldnldn't have to wait long for the next part. : )~

    Kiri
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  • From on February 26, 2004
    This story is so good, the plot is very captivating, I can't wait to see what happens next. You've kept me at computer screens for two days now when I'm outside of class.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 25, 2004
    wow, what a nasty little cliffhanger. it makes me want the next part that much quicker. i hope ron will be okay. i'm sure he will be, but i'll keep my fingers crossed regardless. this should be very very exciting, if this chapter was any indication. the storytelling is top notch and i love how you have harry interact with his friends. the scene with hermione at harry's for date night was great. her reaction to snape appearing was so funny. i was a little confused at how the little prank on kieran went down, mainly just where the first harry went to. i guess he apparated home or something. keep up the great work and i look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Mara on February 25, 2004
    Good Chapter, I enjoyed 'seeing' Harry & Hermione on their 'date' night. I did spot a grammar error however, here is the text: "Ron and me told Ginny we would help her train up before the quidditch tryouts." This really should be 'Ron & I told...'.

    Well, time to read the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Littlelo on February 25, 2004
    Wow....

    I'm on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. This story is turning out to be so much deeper than I had originaly expected. Wonderful! I'm looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - BuffyM on February 25, 2004
    O.O !!!!!!!!*faints*X.x lol I love it!Plz write more!!!
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on February 24, 2004
    Yay keep the story up please. I need to read it is important to me. Ya that was dorky well got to go. UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - R.C on February 20, 2004
    MARVOLOUS story! best harry x snape series ever read! update soon. man i don't mind if u turn this serie into a dojinshi :P
    keep up the good work and email me when u updated ty
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on February 16, 2004
    You know, after reading the first part of this installment, I was going to berate you for the delay. Now, I find myself all aquiver. Yum!
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on February 15, 2004
    This has been an incredible and most enjoyable fic! I love the added details you have; it shows that you're really comfortable with these characters. I have that same comfort with my usual characters and I can only hope to show the same confidence as you do in this genre as I do with my regular universe. You make it seem like a piece of cake!


    Oh, and BTW, shame on you for waiting this long to make an update! I know how it is to keep the following happy and how RL keeps getting in the way.

    Arista
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 15, 2004
    interesting to say the least. the way harry and snape are growing closer and closer is nice. the visions harry keeps getting are disturbing as i suppose they're supposed to be. now from what i said before it won't be too big a surprise to learn these last two chapters were not my favourite. and it isn't just the sex, which from how i visualized it (big mistake on my part. lol) was just incomprehensible. you do realize you're writing about two men right? so how is it that when they were having sex harry's dick was between them? what kind of position were they in? also, something i've noticed (and not just in your fic) is that when two men are involved they seem, or at least one seems, to act very feminine. mannerisms don't seem right and too soft. now this is not a topic i have any experience with (i just realized i sound like i'm trying to prove my sexuality, but that's not the point) but from my own preconceived notions it just seems a bit off. i'll take harry kissing snape in this last chapter as an example. now i realize harry is smaller than snape and have to reach to kiss him, but if i was doing that i would be pulling him down to my level, not standing up on my tiptoes. it's just little things like that that make me not want to read about intimacy between two men. but i'll still keep reading. i'm silly that way.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 15, 2004
    Definitely worth the wait. : ) Two very wonderful chapters.


    Kiri
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