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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - Magdelena on February 15, 2004
    "I expelderamoosed you pretty fast." Possibly my favorite line of any fic, ever! Ooh, rereading is so much fun!


    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 15, 2004
    This is really good. Keep it up. Hope Sev and Harry don't have too many more difficulties. I love this pairing. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 12, 2004
    geez, three chapters out of nowhere. i didn't even see the story on the first page. sorry i'm so late in reviewing. and since there were three chapters to read, i've forgotten all the details. my mind isn't the quickest picker upper. but the sense of what happened remains and i like it. your story continues to amuse and captivate. i have to admit,m kim kind of glad there isn't any sex. i don't consider myself a homophobe, but two guys getting it on just doesn't appeal to me. what i like most about your story is the interaction of the characters. the friendships, the human interest stuff. i love how you deal with all the people and how they get along with one another. that's what really makes this story great. there's no point in saying keep up as there is still some story out there. just know that i look for more eagerly.
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  • From ANON - Mara on February 09, 2004
    Another good chapter. With the way Charlie was acting, I suspect he is going to play 'big brother' to Harry and give him a piece of his mind???

    I also had to do a recheck...in Chap. 37 ...[q\] "She gets louder when someone in the house has a hangover. It's her subtle way of discouraging excessive drinking." Charlie shook his head as if he was still in disbelief of her actions, or that she still did that after all these years. "Bill and me stopped cominge nie nights, once we realized what she was doing. Percy never figured it out, but then he hardly ever partied like the rest of us." Bill led Harry up the stairs. Harry was grateful for the hand on his lower back, guiding him, as he couldn't see very well and his legs were a bit shaky. "You're lucky Harry; as a guest she gives you a break. Didn't you notice most the people out on the grass weren't family?" [q/]

    You have Charlie talking but then you have Bill leading Harry upstairs.

    Also, just for fun...I couldn't get your story out of my head today at work...talk about trying to keep your mind focused...thefigufigured you probably had another chapter posted.

    ; ) I love it when I'm Psychic.


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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 09, 2004
    Talk about a mean hex. Poor Harry. This is getting to be a great story. I can't wait to see moreokinoking forward to it. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Littlelo on February 08, 2004
    Curse you and your cliffhangers! lol
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 06, 2004
    This is great story. Keep it up. Looking forward to more chapters soon. By the way, is there another website you've put this story on? It's just I think I might have read it before. Anyways hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Littlelo on February 05, 2004
    It just gets better and better! :) Thank you for updating so often!
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  • From ANON - Mara on February 04, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter. I enjoyed the humor when Ron comments on Harry being a Christmas Elf...just what I was thinking.

    After the the party will we find Sev waiting for Harry? Will Harry come back with Charlie?

    Anxious to see how Harry will re-evaluate what Sev said ~ I'm sure he must...maybe?.

    I am not sure which is my favorite part, I am enjoying the whole story! Although I seem to have an affinity for Chap3 & 3 & 34 at the moment...just something about the sexual teasing. Almost as good as the restaurant scene in "When Harry met Sally".




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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 03, 2004
    This is great. You're really on a roll. Hope u don't lose it now. Keep it up mate. Love this story. Hope to see some Harry/Severus soon.
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  • From ANON - LustyMuse on February 01, 2004
    OOOOH!

    Moooore!

    *bounces*

    *glomps*
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 01, 2004
    ::Falls out of my chair laughing::

    "Did you have a good ride?" ::snickers helplessly:: Thas jas just *too* good.


    ::Giggles more for good measure::

    Delightful chapter.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 01, 2004
    More more more. This is gr Loo Looking forward to seeing MORE.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 01, 2004
    Nice long chapter. I'm curious, you write really well and all, but from one writer to another, I agonize over rewrites. Do you? Just wondering because you said you have more written. Anyway, good chapter, I enjoyed it. Hermione drugged, that was funny. And Albus asking after Sev's ride, hehe.


    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 01, 2004
    either i woke up in a really good mood today, or you are just a fantastic writer. the scene with harry and his friends by the lake tickling each other was so funny. what was even funnier was snape coming along and commenting on hermione's drugged up state. oh my god! that was funny. you will have to tell me how to write scenes likat. at. on to a very very minor criticism note. i noticed a spelling mistake or two between my bouts of laughter. of course now that i'm wrg thg this i can't remember where exactly they are. but there is at least one. i can't let you off the hook that easily. even when another chapter will be out sometime soon.
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