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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - monk on January 23, 2004
    ah, here you are! I loked for your story nearly everywhere, but i'm in no group so it was a little bit hard finding you. it's realy great you published here. load up the next chapters please and be fast whit it! love your story, fanficnet is bullshit for throwing you out!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 21, 2004
    I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between Gwen and Harry. Just normal every day stuff, but it makes it all seem more real, somehow.

    ::winces waiting for the explosion in the next chapter:: Poor Gwen, to have to take the brunt of Sev's misinformed anger.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 21, 2004
    uh oh. another of harry's secrets is about to be 'outed'. good chapter. i liked the interplay between the characters. and you're brewing mystery.t'st's good. that little truth ball malfoy has might prove someone's undoing. excellent. and let me just say, wow on getting another chapter up so soon. or at least i think it's soon. i just read the last one i think this morning. lol. how do you write so fast?
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 21, 2004
    i really like how you have given Harry a major, foible is all i can think of, lol. anyway, having him go to a shrink is a nice touch. it really shows him to be not perfect. we all know he's not, but this is just another reminder that harry is just a boy who needs help. and here's something that's bothering me. pumpkin juice. is it the drink of choice in britain or something? no orange or apple juice? i've read so many stories where h or or whoever drinks pumpkin juice? what's up with that? lol. just a silly little thing that's bothering me. you have a great story here and if all i can pick apart is pumpkin juice you know you're doing something right. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - LittleLo on January 21, 2004
    I'm so wrapped up in this story. I can't wait to see what you have in store for Harry and Severus!

    Looking forward to more updates! :)

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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 18, 2004
    it was funny pulling that prank on ron. the whole chapter as a whole was good, but there is a point you should be aware of. the whole chapter was grammatically incorrect. you switched verb tenses throughout the whole thing. the chapter started off present tense which threw me right away, but you you switched to past tense. then back. then again. it's an easy thing to fix. just pick one and stick to it. you should go back and change all the present tenses to past or vice verse. i do believe the rest of the story is past tense, so it would be good to keep it together. i hope to see the next chapter a little more coherent. it is a good story other than that little snaffu.
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  • From ANON - Mara on January 12, 2004
    I found this story last night, when I should have been climing into bed. You definately reeled me in on this story. I was bewitched to finish reading it and nearly didn't get any sleep. I figurewoulwould read again today when I'm more alert.

    I wasn't expeg ang an update today, but am definately glad to see a new chapter up. Now I can go and read it again for the second time, except for chaps. 23 &24 ...that will be the third.

    I can't seem to come up with anything new or interesting that the others haven't commented on.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 11, 2004
    Woo Hoo, I liked the sweet dreams idea, very impressive what a little plot bunny that took. Poor Ron, and Sev making fun. Love it. I wait for your posts.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 11, 2004
    LOLOL, love the effect of the 'sweet dreams' glitter. : )~ Certainly makes sense to me. lolol


    I look forward to more of this story.

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Littlelo on January 11, 2004
    I think this is one of the best fics I've read! I love the interaction between Ron and Harry, very realistic, I think. :) I hope you continue to update.

    Please don't leave us hanging,
    Lo
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  • From ANON - C.V on January 10, 2004
    That was a mean place to stop Chapter 22 at!! ARGH clifhangers are just plain evil!! Please write more soon!!
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  • From ochiteirutenshi on January 09, 2004
    *jaw drops* Talk about laying it down bluntly. *grins*

    .:ochi:.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 09, 2004
    oh my! Snape's pissed if he let that little tidbit drop. LOL But it was worth it for Albus' reaction. ::snickers:: I just hope the old man doesn't react to badly. Somewhere in the middle I'm hoping for. I can't wait to find out.


    kiri
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 09, 2004
    this is a very good story. there is a great deal of humour which i find refreshing (considering my own story isn't very funny at all. sigh. lol) this being a slash fic, i wouldn't normally read it (not my cup of tea if you know what i mean) i don't even remember why i sed red reading it, but i'm glad i did. i really like your portrayals of the chaers,ers, especially hermione (i don't know why she stands out. i guess i have a thing for her) and the fact that harry has such a hard time of things is also well thought out. there are so many layers. i really like everyone's interactions. seamus kissing harry to keep severus out of the rumour mill was awesome. i could go on and on about all the good, but i guess i should point out a bit of bad, not that theremuchmuch. spelling is a bit of a problem. just little things like writing he instead of she and little tiny mistakes of that nature. also, once, i saw a tense mistake. you jumped from past to present tense and then back again. it just confused me to no end. it might have been a thought from a character, but i'm not sure. for things like thoughts, maybe you could use '...' marks. (not the ... but the ' ' ) it would differentiate thinking and speaking which use " " . just a thought. hehe. anyway, i am enjoying your story and look forward toe.
    re.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on January 09, 2004
    You've just gotta continue this. This is one great story. I wish they'd hurry up and get together. Hope Harry doesn't suffoo boo badly. Still wish Sirius could come back. I think Harry deserves some happiness. Keep it up.
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