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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - Irihi Safaia on August 31, 2004
    *bounces happily* woot! I love this story, please hurry and write more. Will Remus frequent that bar often? *giggles*
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on August 31, 2004
    I am finally getting back into this series after taking a bit of a break from fan fiction. I am so glad that I did. This story continues to impress me. The thoroughness of your writing is amazing. The way you write makes it seem impossible that the story will ever end. Each chapter, one problem is resolved an anotheergeerges. It makes the story facinating and, though long, not at all tedious, since the plot continues to advance. While I am sure that is your intention, I just wanted to point out that it is appreicated.

    I love that, although Severus and Harry are in love and happy together, it is not all sunshine and roses. They have their troubles like any other couple would. It is so tempting, in fiction, to just write the happy ending and be done. I am glad that you are taking the time to make you work plausable. The story is as true to life as is possible, including the way the characters are written. As with the details that distinguish real life from blatant fantasy, you've preserved the characters as close to canon as possible. Harry and Severus are Harry and Severus as JKR wrote them, with the same mannerisms and personalities. It is sometimes a difficult thing to do, when it is so much easier simplydistdistort the characters to suit our purposes.

    I suppose that is why you have such a remarkable work here. You have obviously put a great deal of effort into this to ensure that it does not become glaringly AU, or AR. Please, do continue writing this.

    Lupusdragon/Draconawolf
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  • From ANON - Lychee on August 30, 2004
    Oooh, I'm so excited that you're still writing this! I thought maybe you'd fallen off the planet or something. So uhm, where can I get a copy of that board game? ^_^
    Heh heh, seems like Remus is going to quite enjoy meeting "Seth". Do please update soon. I'm begginu heu here!
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  • From ANON - Ezj on August 30, 2004
    MMMMMMmmmmmm AWESOME... It's just brilliant
    Already chapter 56... And each are just so long to...
    whoho... it's 2.40Am so this is the only vocabulary I have
    right now so you have to settle with LOVELY GREAT and pwease more...^^
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les on August 30, 2004
    I am still a very faithful reader. That was funny about poor old Remus. Update soon. I hate having to wait so long for one of your chapters.
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  • From ANON - Mara on August 30, 2004
    New email, but same Mara as Gabix615. : )

    Thanks for having a new chapter up! The title did give me a bit of a chuckle..."A Wolf in Wolf's Clothing", or should it have been aptly named a Wolf in Sheep's clothing. I see Severus had fun with a Remus doll, good show with putting Kieran in the floo again. I also enjoyed Hermione having a little fun with
    Dudley, tipping the oaf off the sofa.

    Ah, 'tis a pleasure reading this...numerous times, might I add. Grammar is not my forte, but nothing jumped out; spelling was fine and I hadn't noticed any
    inconsistencies in the flow.


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  • From ANON - Aden on August 21, 2004
    GAH! I love this story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've read it 13 times all 54 chapters and still can'tr get enough of it! I'm about to burst with anticipation, waiting as I am for the next chapter. oooooo! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's srry rry well written and ohmygod there just arn't enough words in any of the languafges that I know to describe it! ah! Have I mentioned that I love this story and and bursting with antisipation for the next chapter? WAH! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok, enough obsesing for one day..... I go to read the story... AGAIN!!!!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ^^

    Aden
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  • From ANON - Moira on August 20, 2004
    WOW. this has to be one of the best stories I've ever read. I don't know how I'll ever go back to the real Harry Potter novels. Thank you so much for sharing your story, and I really hope to see more of it put up soon! I'm hopelessly addicted :)
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  • From ANON - Paula on July 26, 2004
    Please continue with this story. It is very interesting so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Solo\'s Ghost on July 25, 2004
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read for Harry Potter!!!! Please please please update sooon! I love the way you didn't change Snae a lot too many authors just make him act extremly out of character but your Sev is sooo realistic!!!!! I can't wait to read more!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Aden on July 23, 2004
    Oh. My. God. I Absolutly LOVE this story!!!! If you don't continue it, I'll die!!! I've been surching for a Harry/Snape fic that could ceep my inturest for the past year! This is the only one that's deen able to do it! I love your writting, I love the story ideah, I love the potrayal of the caracters, especially Severus. FINALLY, a good Harry/snape fan fic. And not just good; this is a work of genious!!!!!!! I do hope that you plan on continuing, because I am enjoying this more than I could ever tell you. Thank you for being the wonderfull author you are!

    Bravo


    Aden
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  • From ANON - jellycatty on July 22, 2004
    i have decided that this is the best fan fic that i have read in a long time and your have to post more!! if you dont i might die from curiosity becuase i want to know how it ends, please dont give up on this story because its really interesting and i can barely stop reading to eat, a lot like i was when i read the real harry potter books. keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Mara on July 21, 2004
    Always some sort of roadblock for Harry! Glad Sev & He were able to talk.

    So, when are we going to see more on the House that Harry's building? Now that Vernon is kaputt, will the attitude of Dudley and Petunia change towards the wizarding world or will their dislike be expounded.


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  • From ANON - Kathleen on July 20, 2004
    Okay, first, exallent story, and I can't wait for some mroe. Now, YOU MADE ME LATE FORK ORK THREE TIMES!!!!! ....I was so cought up in reading, I missed the time, I was staying up till anywhere from 6-8 in the morning, reading for all I was worth. You right very very well, and should consider doing your own story. usluuslutly love this fanfic, it's one of the best I've ever read. I really loved it. I am so ready for another chapter, but very happy to finally be cought up with every one else. Not to menchion I prolly wouln't be late to work for a while yet. Heh. I get off around midnight, so stay up late wasn't that big of a deal, it was getting off my arse, and stop reading that was. Have I mentioned that I love this? No, well I do. I really do. It's a great story. I'm always hunting for long, good, well developed stories that are like this. Really, you should conisder doing your own book. I'd deffinatly buy it and read it. Yes, very good. Um, I'm now going to bed, so that I won't be late tomarrow but if you've got a yahoo or msn thing, to let people know when you update, I'd love to have it, so I can come seeerrr read, more. ^_^ Night, and great job!!
    ~Kat~
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on July 19, 2004
    OMG! I just about flipped when I saw the update! I had wondered if you had let this wonderful book fall to the wayside.

    What an interesting turn of events, now that Dudders must face new ordeals. How will Harry get anything accomplished, now?

    I can't wait for the next installment-well, I can, but that's only because I have no choice!


    Arista
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