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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - Lychee on July 18, 2004
    Holy feckin' cra mad made it through! I've been reading this for the last three days. I was late for work because I just had to finish "one more chapter". What can I say? WOW!!! This is just awesome! I thought it was really cute and fun in the begining but I love the way things have twisted and turned since then. And it's nice to see someone else with the same vision of Snape that I have. Can't wait for the next chapter! Whoo-hoo!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on July 18, 2004
    a very emotional chapter. you handle the friendships and the interactions beautifully. i really love hermione and harry's friendship and how they talk and carry on. it's very refreshing. i do have a complaint though. when harry was telling severus about the picture, yourn ofn of phrase. from reading your previous chapters and 'witnessing' the events, the reader knows what actually happened, but from how harry told severus, it's not clear. "Did Albus tell you it was Ron's friend that led me to believe he was dead?" this line here is very confusing. who is believed to be dead? severus didn't know harry thought ron was dead at the time. the rest of the exchange goes on in the same vein not really taking into account that the professor shouldn't know the details of the embrace between ron and harry. sheesh, that went on longer than i intended. hehe. other than that very small, but important part of the story, i for the most part really enjoyed the chapter. can't wait for more. hopefully the site will stay up for another posting.

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  • From ANON - Gina on July 17, 2004
    To be honest the last chapter or 2 I've thought to be a bit off from your usual style, and content. But this chapter I'm so relieved to see that you've really gotten back into your flow. This chappie really characterizes what I've loved about this story especially...the long chapters, a hot scene(or reming ing of one), some conflict, some humor, and a direct path to the next chapter, and continuous flow in the story. This chapter really chaptured all of that and I am glad! Keep up the good work! An avid reader waiting for an update! : )
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  • From ANON - Bryt on July 16, 2004
    Excellent chapter! I wonder if Dudley will learn anything there that he shouldn't know. Like about Sev, for example. Theoretically, if Voldie got Dudley and Dudley said something about 'that Death Eater' who was in the apartment before Harry 'banished' him, there could be hell to pay.

    And what's Lucius on about? It's something Lucius doesn't want anyone to know about, even (or especially) Voldemort... And Lucius could do the same thing for Severus... What is it? It couldn't be potions, at least.

    I can't wait to see the next part. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jet on July 16, 2004
    Great chapter. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Davenrood on July 15, 2004
    Hi Lee Lee!!! It's been a while since I've been able to read this story but I LOVE IT STILL!!! Great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. You are my FAV ff writer!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jessica on June 29, 2004
    o my goodness! this is the best story i've ever read off of any of the fanfiction sites i've been on! i LOVE it!! i love how you can make the real hp stories and this one fit together logically. and the way you have hooked harry and sev up is so origional...i really really really like your storry...keep writing!! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2004
    More, I nMoreMore give me more!
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  • From ANON - Jet on June 19, 2004
    I love your story. Please do update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next!

    hee hee I can imagine what would happen if Ron finds out abot that headline under the photo.
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  • From Anatra on June 14, 2004
    Wow....good stuff. It took me awhile to read it all but I'm absolutely LOVING this story. The most recent chapter was hilarious! Poor Ron, he's not going to do very well with that picture...but I suppose he'll survive. I can't go back to the very beginning and compliment you on ever little thing that I've enjoyed over the course of this story, but just know that you are a fantastic author and I hope that you continue to update with the same amazing stuff that you've already written. Keep up the totally excellent work! :D *snuggles Snape/harry*

    ~Anatra
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on June 12, 2004
    Gee, you really got a good story here, but um...I'm confused. I thought this was a Harry/Severus story and now it seems like Harry loves Ron...what's up with that? I mean if the Daily Prophet reported it...it's probably true...right? And they were hugging, and the whole family is over at Harry's house? Poor Severus...you've just been stringing the poor guy along! Feel free to send him over to my house. I'll make him feel better!
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    *smirk* How's that for a review??? I couldn't resist after the one you left me last time!! But seriously, there was no sex in this chapter, when do Harry and Severus get to have sex again? *runs and hides*

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on June 12, 2004
    what a chapter. even in such a brutal and violent chapter, i found lots of humour. of course that might just be because i'm a sick bastard. hehe. seriously though, the whole misunderstanding over vernon and ron was quite amusing to me. and ron ron was smart enough to figure it out. that's rich. i really liked that. however, you gave it away by explaining the mix up while it was happening. i think it would have been better, a little more thrilling (not the right word, but i'm having a mental breakdown at the moment) if you had just let the action flow and let the reader in on the secret when ron figured it out. well, i can't wait for the next chapter. hopefully it won't be as long a wait. hint hint.
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  • From Mikito on May 22, 2004
    Great story!
    I really love it!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Gina on May 18, 2004
    I dunno, but chapters of late seem be lacking in your usual flare. Also, in this chapter alone, I found wholwhole incident with the breaking the glass-reminder of the Dursleys, and not noticing the potion Ron slipped him, and being unawares of Ron in the next room when he woke up, very unfitting. I just don't see how any of those incidents are possible, he's having all this traning with Severus and Kingsley (which you have't brought up in a while) but yet he's soed aed and fooled in these simple situations....ok, i do understand he is in his own home, he may not check his food...but common, wasn't that training supposed to be totally ingrained into his head that it would be second nature...yet, it seems like all that training had totally dissapated. Sorry, sorry. I'm not flaming, and mean no harm, but I just found that little bit a bit incongruent with the story.

    Thanks, hoping for an update always. A faithful reader who always wants more SMUT!
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  • From ANON - Ruth on May 17, 2004
    yay!!! i love this story so much!!

    ohhh...what will they d Ver Vernon?? and why did Sev tell Ron about the attack..did he want them to be saved??
    can't wait for the next chapter, i hope Harry's alright when he finds out..
    aaww...i love him n Sev together, they're so cute!! :)

    keep up the excellent writing!
    XxX
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