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Reviews for Death Eater Takes a Holiday

By : LeeLeePotter
  • From ANON - Luna Riddle on April 29, 2004
    i had started reading this story when it was on fanfiction.net, and was saddened when it was taken down, so i'm happy to see it here. this uch uch an amazing story, truely beautiful, and this is coming from a slytherin, so it's saying something. i'll be looking forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - Nation on April 26, 2004
    wow this is brilliant can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Linis on April 20, 2004
    Ummm sorry to be a bother but I've had to change my email addy and thought i ought to tell you... by the way great chappie this time... even though I've already reviewed it already.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - Emel Raines on April 20, 2004
    I would log in, but I've forgotten my password and it's not sending it to my email, so I think I've forgotten my exact login too. But anyway. It's just as good as ever. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Tracy Hill on April 20, 2004
    Another brilliant installment. I cant wait to see what happens when Sev finds out Vernon thumped Harry!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gina on April 19, 2004
    DAMN!! DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!! I was so looking forward to some nice smut chapter, full of detail, thatld hld have been such a treat to read...especially with that chapter title "Pleasures of the Flesh"...boy was i wrong. Not that the chapter was bad or boring by any means, but when I assumed it would be smut filled, this chapter just didn't compare...and why did you decide to name this chappie Pleasures of the Flesh??...it didn't seem to fit with the chapter.. Thanks for the update though! : P
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  • From ANON - macgyver70 on April 19, 2004
    Hi! I've just started reading your story a few days ago. It's a fun, well-balanced read. I feel like i'm reading two or three stories in a series. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on April 19, 2004
    That is awesome. I am glad that Sev was... comforting (of sorts) Harry after the incedent. Hehehe. Ok well update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dante on April 18, 2004
    The story line is good, the characters are developed and it makes for an enjoyable read.

    However, you need to work on subjective and objective case pronounds and subject/verb agreement as well as verb tenses. You need a beta who is skilled in English grammar.

    That being said, I would like to know when you update the story as I wto fto finish it.

    Dante
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  • From ANON - Linis on April 18, 2004
    Funky... evil Dursleys evil... sweet sevvy though... Can't wait for more

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - AristaStarfyr on April 17, 2004
    Harry has grown up a lot! It takes much to face one's adversaries. Also, good for Sev, in showing great restraint in not throttling the 'family'. Interestingly enough, Albus didn't seem to push this 'choice' for the Dursleys as overtly as he would with mages. Does he have a different set of ethics for Muggles? Or was this more a test on Harry to see how he would handle the situation? He passed with flying colors in my book!

    Ari
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  • From ANON - LustyMuse on April 17, 2004
    Review! Feed the author!

    I would have punched Vernon back but I'm weird that way
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on April 17, 2004
    OMG! ike ike totally love this. More, please...MORE!! *snort*
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  • From ANON - jj the jet plane on April 17, 2004
    is it tha that i think something bad is going to happen at lunch?
    cus i do
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  • From ANON - Gina on April 15, 2004
    Hi ya! Lovely, story; it is always such a treat to know you update this story frequently! Ok, though, I love fluff etc.. but I'm just wodering where your headed with this story and how many more chapters you'll have..though I LOVE this story and don't want it to end mind you... : ) Love that outfit and the broom scene..also like that description that Remus had of Harry...very nice to see it from a different perspective.. That Ginny part too was funny.. grabbing his ass!! LOL!! Keep up the fantastic work!!!
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