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Reviews for Ladies Night 1 & 2

By : Vierveijzer
  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 10, 2004
    you have a good premise here but i'm not so sure you're handling it all that well. the idea of lavender and snape is good, but when the girls first found out it was snape they were horrified and disgusted. from what i read of your story, i don't see that changing but there they all are getting excited. teenage girls i guess, i just don't understand them. lol. anyway, it seemed to me that snape was very easy to seduce. with the self control he needs to spy on voldemort and everything, i just can't believe a flash of pussy would affect him that much. your writing style is good, but again i just don't feel the characters are believable or thought out so well. from how lavender's story is going, it sounds to me like it should be hermione's. from the books, lavender is a giggly little air head. she of course can have a crush on snape, but just the way they are talking i don't see any differentiation of characters. a little development of their personalities is needed i think.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 10, 2004
    thanks.
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  • From ANON - Raven on January 10, 2004
    this is FANTASTIC
    its great! keep the chapters coming in
    :-D cant wait for the next one

    Ravn xxx

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  • From ANON - Helena on January 10, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I want MORE!!! Don't stop now!!
    Can't wait to read more of the other girl's stories, more please
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