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Reviews for Hermiones Slytherins

By : DracosNymph
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on January 15, 2004
    Wow! I just love it when Hermione
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  • From ANON - shaolin on January 12, 2004
    I'm not flaming you, just some advice...
    1. Use your periods.......end your sentence correctly!
    2. Space things out more...describe things. Let your readers
    get a clear picture of the scene you are writing.
    3. Use paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to
    understand what is going on..like a change in someone talking
    or a new thought.

    I know I was quite rusty when I started to post fics here...
    the best thing is to look for a good author and read their work.
    It helps to see what grammer is correct, and difft prt proper wri sty styles.
    I know it helped me, you might try it....Good luck....Shaolin
    PS..if anyone flames you...ignore them...don't give up..we
    all start somewhere!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 11, 2004
    Intreguing Story! I certainly like the idea! :) In any case, because the story has a lot of potential, I would recommend getting someone to beta-read your story, or just going over it for spelling and punctuation errors yourself. The story is good, but the spelling and punctuation errors often put people off before they even get to the good stuff! (Yay smut...) I hope to see a future chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - genrou on January 11, 2004
    amusing. having those two fight over her, and her manipulation of them. ^__^ i hope for more soon. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 11, 2004
    Another Draco/Hermione/Snape story! I'm beginning to like these. Not to mention I'm seeing these more often. :) I can't wait to see the lemons, especially between Draco and Hermione. *grins wickedly* Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 11, 2004
    I like the story and other than an amount of spelling and grammer errors, it was good. Please post soon.
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