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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - scifichick774 on March 02, 2004
    Ooh - battle scenes are fun. :) Love the tie in with the Slytherin girl (who I can't remember the name of) and her nightmares. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on March 02, 2004
    Oh so much going on! Will they all make it out alive?! Will the next chapter see the end of the war?! What's wrong w/ Hermione? Is she going to be okay? Ack! Update please! You've left me hangin'!!!
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  • From ANON - jordy on March 02, 2004
    Okay, trying this for the second time...My first review dissapeared when I got up to answer the phone, and my 3 year old climbed into the chair and 'wanted to push buttons like mommy'. Anyway, you have to update soon, before my head explodes! You left me with more questions than answers! *Feeling the pressure on the inside of my skull* ...you don't want my kids to be motherless, do you? PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Susan on March 02, 2004
    Well, I'm nice and tense now. I hope the next chapter is coming soon. I REALLY need to know what happens next. :-)
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  • From ANON - Brian on March 02, 2004
    WOW...great chappie!! But what about E Pluribus Unum???
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on March 02, 2004
    Love this story - it just keeps getting better. The discriptions in Chapter 37 were amazing and Salazar was a terrific addition to the plot. I finally figured out that when you update a chapter at LnLS there is usually a new one (farther along in the story) here as well. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - nocturnus on March 02, 2004
    My computer collapsed, so I was off line all week. Was nice to come back and find this amazing battle.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 02, 2004
    Action packedrie!rie! The ghost of Slytherin, dampeners for the wards, Ginny's bravery, cat Severus, Tonks and Moody flanking Harry, and let's not forget noble Ron and ingenious Hermione.
    Very exciting.

    Please don't let us hang for long. So many love this fic. (Me included.)

    Cheers.

    PS how are the cat drawings coming along?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 02, 2004
    Chapter 37... HOLY CRAP!!! this chapter did answer some questions, but it gave way to new ones..... What did Salazar Slytherin do to Hermione & how was he able to do it? Did he fix the wards or is he going to cause more problems? Will Severus & Miss Mintage find the boxes & will this help her know that she can end her nightmares? What will become of Ginny, Neville, Harry & Ron?

    I am hoping that you will be adding more soon, the suspense is threatening to turn my hair gray!!! Til chapter 38, Deb >^..^<
    P.S., I really like your description of the ward room & the miniature castle & combatants!!!
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  • From ANON - e on March 02, 2004
    AaAaAaaaaAAauuuuughhhh!!!!!!!!

    aurgh! auuuughhh!!!!

    actual review impossible. please just update soon, before my head explodes.

    i love you friendlyquark....

    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - Moaning Myrtle on March 02, 2004
    I love the pacing of this chapter -- choppy, disjointed and chaotic, just as I imagine battle would really be. And the cameo of Salazar "great Slytherin git" -- brilliant, just bloody brilliant! And I'm dying to know where Hermione landed when he threw her out of the room!

    Miss Mintage's help looks to be proving invaluable; I hope this helps rid her of her nightmares.


    On a private note (inside joke alert), I'm still giggling -- in the best possible way -- about modulating the frequency. I do so love you! Uh,a faa fan, of course. Not in an I'm-going-to-email-you-constantly-and-call-your-house-and-email-your-roommate kind of way. Oh, wait....never mind.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on March 02, 2004
    Brilliant chapter! Your battle scene is amazing. I love how Hermione takes charge! You did a fabulous job of catapulting her onto equaotinoting with Snape.
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  • From ANON - AC on March 01, 2004
    Excellent story! I love it!

    I really hope Snape doesn't die...

    I like how you've made Ron and Snape friends. This is the first time I've read a fic with the two of them acting civil towards the other, and I love it.

    Keep writing! :-)
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on February 29, 2004
    Awesome! So glad you didn't leave us hanging there!
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  • From ANON - Laura on February 28, 2004
    OMG!!!!!!!!!! That was very intense, and sad. What a relief when Severus grabbed her. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it all works out. Now I must go read your new fic;-))
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