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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - GrrArrg on February 28, 2004
    OMG!!!!!

    That was an awesome final battle, can't wait for the next chapter!!
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 26, 2004
    OOhh another cliffie, really awsome story, please post soon.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on February 26, 2004
    Good. Very good. Even with Evil Cliffie. (perhaps especially with Evil Cliffie; I'm rather fond of them myself).

    More soon. Pretty please with lemon drops on it?
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 26, 2004
    Oh ... wow. That's one of the best final-battle descriptions ever, from Hermione trying to keep her mind on task and being amazed by the noise to the horrible scene of Susan Bones' death (I gasped -- awful, awful -- but still it's much truer to war than the quick rushing death of Avada Kedavra, which might explain why typical final battles in fanfiction seem so bloodless).

    And the ending ... gosh, words fail me. Will Hermione forgive him for saving her life at the possible expense of the war? Not that I can blame him. In the clutch, love won out over honor.

    ke tke the idea of Hermione with a tiger Patronus, but sadly JKR has already decided it's an otter. Eh -- yours is cooler.

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  • From ANON - Vicki on February 26, 2004
    Amazing, AMAZING chapter! Just wondering though, did you mean to change Hermione's Patronus to a tiger because it is more ferocious than her patronus in the books, an otter, or did you just not remeber it from OotP? Just wondering. I only asked because nobody else seemed to have noticed or mentioned it in there reviews. I guess they were all blown away by your magnificent battle scene.
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  • From ANON - jordy on February 26, 2004
    What What WHAT???!?!?! You just Had to end it there, didn't you??? I get all wo up up about everything, you almost kill hermione, you make Severus risk his life saving her, revealing himself and throwing their plans for killing Voldemort out the window, had you end it THERE???!?!? Oh I hope that next update is soon...very soon. No fair!! I am waiting ever so patiently, though. Okay, so thats a blatant lie. I have no patience. You're making me to to bang my head against my desk. This is almost as bad as waiting for book 6...
    ;-D
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  • From ANON - Ailowyn on February 26, 2004
    I've been reading this story for a few weeks now, and hardly ever review anything, but I absolutely had to review when this chapter came out. I think that the cliffhanger is perfect, as it doesn't really leave Hermione in harm's way, but does leave much to be answered.

    Even if no one else responds to the Polylove challenge, Ink tnk that it has been well met. The whole story has been very well written; spelling and grammar as near to perfect as I've ever seen in fanfiction, and the story itself flows beautifully. For a Severus/Hermione pairing, it's very believeable; not having her constantly calling him 'Sev' or any number of other utterly unrealistic things that most SS/HG pairings have in common. Finally, I'm amazed at the speed with which you've put new chapters out. All in all, one of the best Potter fics I've ever read.

    Very well done, and I hope that there's more to be heard from you in the future.

    -Ailo
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on February 26, 2004
    *gasps* *faints* *gets up and repeats*
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  • From ANON - child of a fallen god on February 26, 2004
    Wow...wow...wow...wow. That was an explosive chapter. It was absolutely amazing! Quite literally the best thing i've read yet!
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on February 26, 2004
    ::lets out breath:: I have fingernail marks on my face!! PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
    Thank you! :-D

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on February 26, 2004
    Wow! was was... wow!
    I may send a longer review later, but for now, I'm at lost for words!
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  • From ANON - trulymad on February 26, 2004
    From one cliff to the next! AHHHHHH! *cries*
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 26, 2004
    I cannot believe how well you described the battle scene. Everything came so alive. Poor Susan Bones....what a horrible way to go. annoannot wait to read the second half of the battle. These Lemons better be good...those two have waited long enough and have loads of pent-up frustration. LOL. Thanks for a great chapter. :-)
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  • From ANON - Evanescence on February 26, 2004
    Talk about a terrible cliffhanger! I can't wait to see the outcome!

    Keep up the good work,

    - EVa
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 26, 2004
    Chapter 36... HOLY MY!!! When a chapter ends like this it makes me wish that I would have waited to read the story after it was completed bse Ise I don't want to wait to out out what will happen next!!!

    This chapter is... WOW!!! I really like how you wrote the scene of Hermione searching for Severus, very touching!!! Poor Susan, what a nasty way to die & I feel so bad for Hermione having had to see it happen!!! I am so very glad that Severus did what he did!!! Where is Ron & are Harry & Ginny okay? PLEEEEEEEEEASE don't leave us hanging for too long!!!

    Til chapter 37, Deb >^..^
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