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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 26, 2004

    At long last... battle. Mmm... you knoost ost SS/HG romantic plot goes on before or after the final battle.... none of the fics I have read so far shows the relationship along before to during, to aftermath. Most of fics just jumped the whole thing. Mmmm... I'm beginning to understand, I think why you chose 'A Terrible Temptation' as a title.

    Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next installment. I hope that you are feeling all good and good as new. Though, as a reviewer, I would like you to write some more.. aotheother person, your health should come first, and my compliments to your Muse and your beta. Cheers!

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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 26, 2004
    Wow. That was angsty.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 26, 2004
    You certainly know how to build the tension in a fic, don't you? More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Sci-Fi Nut/ JStockert on February 26, 2004
    Ack! You left it there? I'll be waiting for the next chapter with much anticipation. Hope that you're feeling better and great job on the story.


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  • From ANON - clare_aden on February 26, 2004
    Just to let you know how much I enjoy the scenes with the cats (names, hierarchy...).
    And the way you use Mrs Norris is deliciously unusual.
    More, more...
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 26, 2004
    O-no
    your not gonna off the PM are you?

    Same ole same ole- brilliant, great ...

    Enjoying this story. Virtual roses to you.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 26, 2004
    Chapter 35... What a way to end this chapter.... WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?!? Dementors & Death Eaters & Giants, the DA & the Order will have their work cut out for them!!!

    This was a FABULOUS chapter!!! I really like the fact that all 3 of them are spending time with Severus!!! It's nice that Hermione doesn't have to hide her feelings from her friends!!! After all is said & done I do hope that everything will work out for Ron & Lavender as well as Severus & Hermione!!! Maybe after the battle Albus will let them be together, they deserve that!!!

    So, Blaise is the other spy, FANTASTIC!!! It's good that they had someone in the dorms that could keep ane eye on Draco, but sadly it didn't end up helping much in the end:( I do hope that Draco gets his in the end!!!

    Really can't wait til your next update!!! Til chapter 36, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on February 26, 2004
    The story is certainly heating up! I do hope you update soon.

    I love the way too how you described Severus's voice - 'chocolate mousse'. Mmm. :-)

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 26, 2004
    the end just a beautiful yet sad sentiment. great chapter thanks.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 25, 2004
    Please please please update this soon!!!! Great chapter! I'm keeping my fingers crossed, Severus has been through sooooo much he's got to come back in one piece.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 25, 2004
    But...but...Sevvie won't actually die will he? *grows stern and digs through junk for pitchfork and torch* I've invested way too much feelings and tintointo your fic - so just in case...
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 25, 2004
    Eeeeek!! Excellent chapter, but pleeeease don't make us wait to long after that extremely evil cliff you made us fall off of. LOL


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 25, 2004
    Positive-thinking man, Snape is ... ;-) I hope you have a better fate in store for him.

    Glad to see humor woven into this tense situation -- "the change from seven pound cat to hundred and twenty pound girl made an impression on him" is a great groan-worthy pun -- and the description of Voldemort's unjust (and unreal) handsomeness is a nice aside. (Plus a nice parallel with Snape, good though greasy. Of course it's hard to think of him as ugly now that Alan Rickman is inextricably fused with the character. Mmmm ... whoops, sorry, back to reviewing.)

    Your "domestic" scene is affecting. Snape must really love her if he's willing to let her help him at a time of weakness. (And the fact that he lets Ron and -- gasp -- the famous Mr. Potter stick around to watch is a sign of strong friendship, or at least, in the latter case, a strong ability to endure irritation ...)
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  • From ANON - Gabriele on February 25, 2004
    After having made it to chapter 31 I H.A.V.E. to tell you again how much I adore this story! Its so lovely and easy to read (without g shg shallow or simple minded) - its just a perfect, wonderfully written story!
    The cat scenes are incredible: the names of the cats, the scene where Hermione caught her first mouse (Ha!), the hierarchy, the looking down of the real cats on the animagi (very entertaining!) - the whole thing its heaven for a cat lover!
    And I also like how you develop the characters: your Ron is wonderful (I too see him more mature than as a sidekick), your Severus is adorable, your Minerva has much more feeling for interpersonal relationships than the all-knowing headmaster (I too see them as a married couple). Harry grew up in your story and that he is finally together with Ginny is heart warming. And I also like that you gave Levander a little bit more room than only being girly-background in this school.
    I am curious how you will develop the whole thing up to the final battle and I hope they all will come out without too much harm.
    Thanks for sharing this gem with us!
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  • From ANON - Hermes on February 24, 2004
    While I love this story, I don't want you to abandon your other one.

    Please update, for my sake!
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