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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 23, 2004
    Man I feel so bad for Hermione. She's got this wonderfully romantic and sexy man and she can't show him off. I'm also still loving the Snape/Ron friendship. I'm also wondering since Severus and Hermione can't cuddle and be seen together as a couple as humans, what's to stop them from taking a stroll as cats. I think they would be so cute all cuddled up in a bundle together.
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on February 23, 2004
    Ah, so wonderful to come home to a few chapters I hadn't read. I like that you're incorporating Draco back into the fic, and I'm thrilled that you've paired up Hermione & Snape's cat forms. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on February 22, 2004
    Flying pigs...not so odd in the wizarding world, methinks.
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  • From ANON - White Lilac on February 22, 2004
    Hi, still adoring your fic.

    I almost agree with one of your many, many reviewers who said it's very difficult to review ystorstory, because it's always perfect. We have to choose between "great!", or "I loved it", "I adored the new chapter!", "it's wonderful"... I'm sure it's very pleasant to read such comments, and you deserve them, but I'm running out of synonyms to try and change a little my reviews!

    However, this time I have a little "but" to say. I know Hermione is very clever, but I don't find believable that it took her so long to find out who the writer of the letters was, and so little time to realize the black cat is Severus. Sure I don't know much about cats -and I'm really enjoying peeking at the "cat-society"- so I don't know if cats have black eyes or if that doesn't exist. But still, I would have believe it better had she realized it while working with Soot.
    As this will probably be my only "but", I really wanted to say it, so I will change a little my usual reviews.

    Anyway, I'm loving your fic, enjoying it very much, please don't stop writing (though I think you're not going to), thank you, thank you, thank you.


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  • From ANON - heartnut on February 22, 2004
    Mmmm. I like the interplay between the cars. I'm not a cat person, but this idea is warming up to me. I think you write dialogue very well, and the atmosphere is very clear in your descriptions. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on February 22, 2004
    Ooh two new chapters!!

    Both excellent. I am loving the cat tribe so much, as a cat owner myself!!
    Good stuff, more soon please?
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 22, 2004
    Another yummy chapter! And Harry is actually putting his brain in the 'ON' position--surely the age of miracles is not yet past!

    And I think 'Curiosity' suits Hermione down to her extremely well-manicured paws. Heh.
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 22, 2004
    Does this mean you'll be giving us kitty lemons?
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on February 22, 2004
    Buttercup turned me on to this story and I have to say I love it. I won't go chapter by chapter, but this last one:


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  • From ANON - Gabriele on February 22, 2004
    God is this a lovely story! I like this plot more than the time turner fics. And mademade a wonderful story of it. Its much more nasty for dear Severus to be in the body of his Nemesis
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on February 22, 2004
    I have to say that I really love the cat stuff. You should put in a little kitty flirting. That would be cute. I love this story and can't wait to see how it unfolds.
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  • From ANON - e on February 22, 2004
    is there a point in leaving "reviews" for you, or this story?
    there is no criticism, constructive or flaming, that i could possibly think of, except that you really ought to be spending every minute of every day writing and giving us more chapters. and even that wouldnt be said, because it has been thouroughly established, even amongst one of your more impatient and obsessive followers *looks around like she's not talking about herself* that your healthays ays comes before the story. that said, glad youre feeling well (you are, arent you?) and i just hope that your muse does not desert you.
    where was i? oh. reviewing. no point.
    although sometimes i just want to send you back your story with red pen all over it, with things like "thats funny" or "awww" or "thats a good line" or "i liked that". what im saying is, i get an urge to point out exactly which tiny parts i really enjoyed out of the whole enjoyable chapter. but i dont think you need that. its not very constructive, and you dont care if i think that tha gra great line. well, you care, cuz its nice that people like it. but the fact that i have a quote from one of your chapters written in my real journal, because i liked it so much, doesnt mean much other than "watch out for that one, stalker potential high"
    so theres no point in "i liked when..." reviews.
    but i feel silly writing reviews just gushing about how much i love you and your story.
    but i also refuse to not review, because any encouragement is good encouragement. and if you only got reviews from people who criticised you (constructively or not) then you wouldnt know how many people (im quite positive im not the only one) adore you and your writing.
    ok. i was orginally just going to do the regular gushing wow youre great keep going i love you friendly quark stuff, and then thers a couple paragraphs and a life story. im extremely self centered (or so i think. i give its lots of consideration, constantly. thinking about me. constantly doing that) and therefore no matter what point im trying to make, it ends up having to do with me.
    so i apologize. the jist is. youre great, i love you.
    hearts to you and your muses friendly quark
    xoxo
    ...me...
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on February 22, 2004

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  • From ANON - Ireth on February 22, 2004
    Loverly chappy! Teehee Soot has to train her... This ought to be amusing!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 22, 2004
    Chapter 33... I really do like the parts you write with the cats!!! There is a lot of humor in that & it is very enjoyable reading!!! I can't wait to see how Hermione's training goes!!!

    So, what is up with Malfoy? It will be interesting to see what the DA finds out!!! Til chapter 34, Deb >^..^
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