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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - kate on February 21, 2004
    Ah, at long last -- we discover that Mrs. Norris is one of those rare cats who over-identify with their human hence her dislike for Hermione. What a hoot...

    I love how you weave together so many nearly forgotten plot points (feline society and politics, Harry and Snape-as-Harry, Malfoy) without losing the SS/HG thread that must run through the story. Amazing.

    I also love the parallel between Snape and Hermione and their surreptitious Animagus activities; how interesting that neither of them have shared this information with the other, yet both (now) know. I will admit to being thrilled over the thought process that Hermione goes through in the "if I were a Slytherin why wouldn
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 21, 2004
    795 reviews! Almost 40,000 hits! That is just insane! Congratulations sweetie.

    Not to sound too pervy, (okay, I am a LITTLE pervy) but um, is there going to be any cat sex in the future? That is pervy, isn't it. I was just wondering because Severus sounds like one sexy piece of tail. Could you describe Hermione's cat self again please? Curiosity - cute name. I hope that it doesn't kill the cat.

    Cheers dear.
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 21, 2004
    I hope curiosity doesn't kill the cat. Regardless, it's the perfect name for her.

    "There was a line there that she was completely uninterested in crossing" made me laugh, and then it made me think: If an witch gets pregnant in animagus form ... urgh, never mind, I see why she doesn't want to cross that line.

    Oh, and poor Harry -- it's got to be hard, knowing that Snape made a better Harry than he did. ;-)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 21, 2004
    thanks
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 20, 2004
    You captured hte language Severus would use perfectly... "I have had precicesly two willing partners..." just priceless. Well done. At least Harry has finally decided to grow up a bit. I've always thought Ron the better rounded of the two, and you've shown that beautifully in this story.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 20, 2004
    *sigh* very nice. thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 19, 2004
    Friendlyquark,

    Keep up the great work! I'm really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what happens next.

    Kim
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 19, 2004
    Oh, brave new chapter, that has such snogging in it! (fans self vigorously) Looking forward to when Harry gets hit by the Big Clue Brick, though I suspect he's feeling the edges of it already.

    Yum!

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  • From on February 19, 2004
    What a wonderful story! I'm pleasantly surprised that a challenge managed to inspire such a complex story. I loved your treatment of the cats' society. It's the first time I read a story where the author has actually thought about what it means for an animagus to turn into an animal, having to fit into a community.
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  • From ANON - Brian on February 19, 2004
    any fluffier and you could have used it to stuff a teddy bear, but i love it that way. No one has ever developed Lavender into a character in quite this way, and i love that too.
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  • From ANON - heartnut on February 19, 2004
    Wonderful. Thank you thank you thank you. Keep going, you know.
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  • From ANON - WhiteLilac on February 19, 2004
    Sweet chapter.
    But, I don't know why, I have that weird apprehension about the last line you wrote. Maybe the immediate future is not going to be so rosy glowing, with Voldemort around, and the NEWTs coming (just kidding here!)... Or maybe I'm just being paranoid.
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  • From arcessita on February 19, 2004
    ::adores::
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 19, 2004
    Chapter 32... This was BEAUTIFUL!!! I don't think Severus could have explained things any better!!!

    I really like how you shared with us the way these 4 people feel!!! It is so right for them to be happy!!! Til chapter 33, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 18, 2004
    Great chapter. Severus always knows just the right thing to say to calm Hermione. Thank you for updating so frequently.
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