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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Lizzie on November 03, 2005
    Wow! What an awesome story! Thank you so much for pushing through your many medical maladies to finish it! =)
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  • From ANON - lasair69 on October 15, 2005
    i knew as soon as i read your little note and disclaimer at the beginning of chapter 1 that this was going to be a winner! i was right. ok i know im only at chapter 22 but there is no way it can go down in flames after being amazing thus far! the first fan fic i ever read was the fire and the rose and this ties with that as being the best two i've read. i will look up your other fics once i've finished this one, however i'll only read finished ones as i'm an impatient bunny who gets upset when can't finish a story that im really getting into!
    keep up the good work lasair69
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  • From ANON - JJ on September 18, 2005
    How to explain this. . . I loved it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Flameofthenight on August 23, 2005
    You have a whole bunch of grammatical errors that are very annoying to read. Please for the sake of your readers go over you work before you post it!!!
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on August 13, 2005
    Oh what a beautiful story!!! At first I was a little squicky about Snape in Harry's body, but it turned out far much better than I imagined. You do wonders. I love the fact the him and Ron became friends. Too cute. Haha. I loved how it all turned out, though in the epilogue I was wondering how Harry turned out. Maybe I missed him in there or not. Anyway, I love Snape/hermione. :-D Great job.
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  • From ANON - Jo on August 05, 2005
    I really, really loved your story, please keep them coming
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  • From ANON - <--Beth--<<< on July 30, 2005
    I usually don't review, but i had to say how awesome this story was, I couldn't stop reading it
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  • From ANON - Katt on July 19, 2005
    I compliment you on your ability to bring out the emotions in your readers. At a couple of points you almost had me crying. . . or laughing. . .or depressed. . . you catch my drift. . .

    Anyway I wish you luck in all that you write!
    ^_^

    Katt
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  • From ANON - Shannon on June 09, 2005
    Ok I am not done reading this yet but I just had to take a minute to review. I just finished chapter 24 and I have to say that the garden scene was fabulous. I was a Psych major and on my own I have done huge amounts of study on dream analysis and so throughout this story the dream sequences have been very interesting for me. There is so much emotion going on there and I am anxious to see where you go with it so I am sure I will review again once I am done reading your fic. I have truely enjoyed reading your very original story so far, its a wonderful and new way of doing the HG/SS pairing and I am very impressed.
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  • From ANON - Lillia on June 05, 2005
    Thank you so much for writing such an utterly beautiful story. It's perfect.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on May 26, 2005
    I only just read this story and I really really like it :-) but I did just want to point out a couple of things...

    MANY authors get this wrong, you are by no means alone. I guess it works differently in the US or something, it's the best explaination I have for such a common pair of errors. (a) In her 7th year, assuming Hermione started at Hogwarts at the usual age (11) and not early because of being so damn clever, she turns *18* in September. We KNOW this from JKR herself. She has specifically revealed in interviews when Hermione's birthday is. So she isn't 17, she's 18. And (b) maybe it was just Snape being, well, Snape, but technically, even at 17, Hermione is an adult in the Wizarding world. He said "nearly an adult". And in muggle Britain 16 is the age of consent, so the only issue for Snape is the teacher/student thing. Still a barrier and worth using for angst etc.

    And secondly, cats do see in colour, just not as many colours as humans. Most mammals see colour but many are colourblind, ie can't differentiate between green and blue. It also depends on breeding.

    Ok, sorry but I had to get it off my chest. I have really enjoyed this fic and am following ADSC (firmly fixed on my favs list), I think you're a really gifted writer! Your humour is spot on and you explore the emotions of the characters so well. Every chapter is crafted to move the story along and you have me laughing and tearing up regularly. A fabulous story :-)
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on May 23, 2005
    What an utterly exquisite story! I loved every word of it!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, write another one with Hermione and Severus!
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  • From ANON - Cherie on April 06, 2005
    What a great story. There were moments when I didn't really get into it...such as the battle. I just feel students wouldn't be fighting and it wouldn't be staged at hogwarts...but eh, that's how i see it. Other than that I think the story was fanfuckingtastic. I look forward to reading more of your works.

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  • From ANON - Karen on March 15, 2005
    Okay, just finished Chpt. 8 and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the fact that Snape as Harry gets to totally belittle Draco and on top of that....BOO!?! That was just brilliant. Off to read more.
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  • From ANON - Jedi Keladry on February 19, 2005
    Cyrano! I've read that passage more times than I care to admit. I knew it was familiar, but Paris tipped me off, too. And you threw a Cyrano reference in earlier. That is my favorite plot, that kind of love triangle. Now i'm off to read more.
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