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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - WhiteLilac on February 16, 2004
    I don't always review, but I check every day for your updates (almost never disappointed with your pace).

    Sweet chapter, that made me grin all the time. Ron listening to a depressed Severus, and Harry panicking and running to Lavender (Lol)!
    I love the way you picture Snape, just perfectst ast as I imagined him (well, I didn't imagine him with Hermione, but you write so well! And you just made it make sense, with that body change).

    You describe quite nicely and accurately the psychology of the different characters, and they are believable; that's one of the reasons I like your story.

    Thanks for it (and for the other fics. I started to read Sub Rosa, only because you wrote it, and I'm loving it. I'm readin bef before moving to the sequel, but I don't think I'll review it, because I don't know if you will get the reviews now it's finished. But I'm sooo happy to know I have sooo much good material to read! -big, big grin-).
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on February 16, 2004
    " Harry wondered if there was a special place in Hogwarts where he could rhythmically pound his head against a wall for a few hours. "

    That scene between Severus and Harry was priceless. I'm still laughing. I think I'll be laughing for the rest of the day. My Tae Kwon Do master will understand, I'm sure. *Frolics, the update was lovely*
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 16, 2004
    Great chapter. I'm glad Harry has realized what a putz he's been and decided to accept the fact Hermione and Severus are together. I'm still loving the Severus and Ron friendship thank you so much for making it so wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on February 16, 2004
    AAAAWWWW! Poor Harry and Hermione. Men are stupid of coarse he didn't know that she would take that comment like that. And poor Hermione being a virgin in love w/ an experienced man. Is is too much to ask for another update today? I'm a bit addicted to this story! *sheepish grin*
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  • From ANON - dryade on February 16, 2004
    gods, i LOVE the last line!!! don't we all wish for a place like this? normal walls tend to leave those ugly burns on my forehead! *grin* great story. very believable plotline and sooo in-character. you go!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 16, 2004
    That was a nice chapter. Hermione looking embarassed while Severus looks at her thighs... kinky.
    Well, I can't wait for the next convocation and the reaction of mean Mrs. Norris. You're making me
    wonder if Hermione would be able to recognize Severus in their animagus form.

    Bye, I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter. A work well done, chap.
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  • From ANON - Imhilien on February 16, 2004
    Oh dear, how embarrassing for poor Hermione! A good chapter though.

    Cheers
    - Imhilien :-)
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  • From ANON - Tifsuz on February 16, 2004
    I think we're going to get along just fine with the inner voice! lol

    Love it as always
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 15, 2004
    It's so touching that Hermione's terribly embarrassing situation is an -- er -- terrible temptation for the potions master. (Must be love.) His musings, sad as they are, seem inevitable and I'm glad you're addressing the issue of experience and his concern that she'll fall for someone less snarky in a few years. It's an improvement for him, really; after all, rather than brooding on tx-Dex-Death Eater thing, he's brooding on the age-gap thing. There's nothing he can do about the past, but the future will fix Hermione's youth and inexperience.

    Will Mrs. Norris treat Hermione with more respect now? Will our heros get some face time in feline form? Will graduation hurry ureadready?? ;-)
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 15, 2004
    Here's to angst, dead mice, and a successful kill! Having watched my own cat spend endless hours of amusement in the front yard in search of a various lawn toys that run and squeak, I can see where Hermione could let herself go in the joy of the hunt, and then immediately regret it. But the joy of the hunt is something she'll need to know as a human, too. (Foreshadowing: Your Guide to Quality Literature). One wishes her a joyous hunt of oh, snakes. Snicker.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on February 15, 2004
    LOL, loved this chapter. : ) The hall scene from her and crook to her and Severus was a hoot.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 15, 2004
    He is so insecure its almost sweet. Killing the mouse, yuck. I suppose that's how they do things in cat world. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 15, 2004
    Hun, you have found one of the few real ways in which to ain ain Murphy.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 15, 2004
    Chapter 30... This chapter has a WONDERFUL mix of confusion, thoughtfulness, humor &ire!ire!!! I really do like how you are writing Severus in this story, very much him, but yet shaowing that he is ict mct more human than some people give him credit for being!!! I really can't wait until graduation so that Hermione can put his mind at ease!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - FadingSlowly on February 15, 2004
    it's been a while since i've been to this site, but the first story i looked for was this one! I LOVE IT! it's really beautiful and i love seeing Snape in a new light, instead of just the "bad guy" that lots of other people portray him as. thank you for giving me that chance. wonderful story.
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