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Reviews for A Terrible Temptation

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - Laura on February 15, 2004
    Very sweet chapter, it was nice to read the private correspondence of the couples, gave insight to the depth of their feelings. Thank you for that. Can't wait for the next chapter, this is curly mly my number one fic to read, first thing I check when I get online is whether or not there is a new chapter up!
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on February 14, 2004
    That was a very sweet chapter...it must be even harder to keep all the character voices seperate when writing a letter from their points of view. Thanks for the update, and have a happy V-day.
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  • From arcessita on February 14, 2004
    I just want you to know that I've been squeeing as I read the last few chapters. Loudly. And version 2.0? I'm having a little trouble considering how this story could be better, but I'd really like to see it.
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  • From ANON - tifsuz on February 14, 2004
    Aww... I love Severus' response.
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 14, 2004
    What a great chapter! I love how you usedtersters to express the characters' thoughts. Brilliant. I can't wait to read the next chapters.

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  • From ANON - crudedly on February 14, 2004
    wonderful story. :) I would love to tell you more, but actually i'm only good at writing criticism and i can't find any with your story. So it will stand that statement all by it'self, but it isn't any less true because of that. It's a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Laurence on February 14, 2004
    Hi,

    You've picked my favorite piece of theatre to bring Severus and Hermione together, how can I be more happy? Well, to be really honest, I think it sounds better with the rimes in french, but I'm parti-pris... (if someday you want them in the original french, send me an e-mail... lol). Well congratulations for a job well done, I'm very impatiently waiting to see how they're going to cope with graduation.

    Thank you very much, hope your health goes better, keep writing ;o)

    Laurence
    Xmonsieur_de_bergeracX@hotmail.com (just remove the X's)
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  • From ANON - MaskedSoon on February 14, 2004
    thats not the end right?
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on February 14, 2004
    Sorry I was a nit-picker in my last review. Lovely, fluffy chapter, and lemon drops all round! Thanks. And I hope you're feeling better.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 13, 2004
    I love mush. Thanks for updating.


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  • From ANON - Mama Wolverine on February 13, 2004
    Barrie - So glad you're back writing. What a wonderful story, but this chapter is very special. Thanks for all the wonderful worlds you're creating for us. To quote Nicole Kidman, " ...because art is important."
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  • From ANON - Deeble on February 13, 2004
    This slice of Cyrano is so apt for your chapter -- what a lucky coincidence, and further confirmation that itthe the perfect metaphor for the potions master. (" 'midst the alchemy we're skilled in"?? Holy cow.) The thought that "twould be an outrage, ... To speak fine words that garnish vain love-letters!" echoes his (terribly sad) pronouncement that any words of love he could write would be tarnished by decades of lying, first for evil and then for good. I hope he gets over it. Maybe he can invent off-the-wall pet names for Hermione that won't have any baggage attached. ;-)

    I agree with Lavender -- Ron's letter is beautiful.

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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on February 13, 2004
    You were right about the insulin, but it was still beautiful enough to make my head spin.
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  • From ANON - Jeanette on February 13, 2004
    Awwwwww Mush. Those were so sweet, all that love right under Dumbledore's nose. I almost, what do I mean almost (I do), want to cuddle Severus and tell him it is alright, the last letter was so poinant (sp). Keep writing you work is great.

    Jeanette
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  • From ANON - Tarrin on February 13, 2004
    I absolutely LOVE the letters chapter. its's such a brilliant and unique way to show how the characters feel about one another. it was truely worth the wait ^_^
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